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Smartphones should not be used in classrooms

Smartphones should not be used in classrooms 1k1BA
There are some compliment from lecturers that smartphones not allowed in the class since they ruined the lesson. Hence, the other perspective that Smart devices is supportive to the learning progress in the class. While I understand why some people suppont the first view, I am still in favour with of the second opinion, thus student able to use their smart phones to interact with new kind of lesson. Those who believe that student bring handhelds into classnoom is not allowed may have Several argument. During their point of view, smart devices as iphomes ruined the class spirit since many student nowaday are distracted by entertaining and Social medias platforms which available on their own handheld. That is the reason why they lost focused on studying. For instance, in university, there are many Student sneaky play mobile games instead following the lecturen lesson, so when being asked about the topic, they find difficulty to answer and get Zeno mark from the angry reachers. Another point is that the connection between student teacher is lost. As Student suffering social media in the class, the the voice of the lectures is lost so it might seperase the understanding between them. Nevertheless, i still side with those who believe that using Smartphones bring valuation while learning. Chief among these is that smart device support quick searching while student unable to understand lecturer question, such as, student can find science research relevant to their question just in one touch. The second reason is that this device with rapid loading of the Internet and cloud system are able help reacher share full scourse suflabus immediately to student. For example, Whole class using Google Drive together then, lecturer sharing full course e - bock, slide, syllasbus very comfortable way instead of spending to print it down or waste time to rell it for their student In conclusion, despite acknowledging why teacher think smart handheld is unneccesary to used in the classroom because of it negative impact To The lesson, i till hold the belief that the important and utility of smartphones cannot replace it out the moment There are some compliment from lecturers that smartphones not allowed in the class since they ruined the lesson. Hence, the other perspective that Smart devices is supportive to the learning progress in the class. While I understand why some people suppont the first view, I am still in favour with of the second opinion, thus student able to use their smart phones to interact with new kind of lesson. Those who believe that student bring handhelds into classnoom is not allowed may have Several argument. During their point of view, smart devices as iphomes ruined the class spirit since many student nowaday are distracted by entertaining and Social medias platforms which available on their own handheld. That is the reason why they lost focused on studying. For instance, in university, there are many Student sneaky play mobile games instead following the lecturen lesson, so when being asked about the topic, they find difficulty to answer and get Zeno mark from the angry reachers. Another point is that the connection between student teacher is lost. As Student suffering social media in the class, the the voice of the lectures is lost so it might seperase the understanding between them. Nevertheless, i still side with those who believe that using Smartphones bring valuation while learning. Chief among these is that smart device support quick searching while student unable to understand lecturer question, such as, student can find science research relevant to their question just in one touch. The second reason is that this device with rapid loading of the Internet and cloud system are able help reacher share full scourse suflabus immediately to student. For example, Whole class using Google Drive together then, lecturer sharing full course e - bock, slide, syllasbus very comfortable way instead of spending to print it down or waste time to rell it for their student In conclusion, despite acknowledging why teacher think smart handheld is unneccesary to used in the classroom because of it negative impact To The lesson, i till hold the belief that the important and utility of smartphones cannot replace it out the moment
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lecturers
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allowed
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class
since they
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.
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devices
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learning
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favour
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to
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use
their
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smart
phones to interact with new kind of lesson.

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that
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student
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bring
handhelds into
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classnoom
is not
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allowed
may have
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point
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view
,
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smart
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devices
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iphomes
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ruined
the
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class
spirit since
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student
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nowaday
are distracted
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Social
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medias
platforms which available on their
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own
handheld.
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the
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reason
why they
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lost
focused on studying.
For instance
, in university, there are
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many
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Student
sneaky play mobile games
instead
following the
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lecturen
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lesson
,
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so
when
being asked
about the topic, they
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find
difficulty to answer and
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get
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reachers
. Another
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point
is that the
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connection between
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student
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teacher
is
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lost
. As
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suffering
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social
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media
in the
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class
,
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the the
voice of the lectures is
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lost
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so
it might
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seperase
the understanding between them.
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,
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i
still
side with those
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who
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believe
that using Smartphones
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bring
valuation while
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learning
. Chief among
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these is
that
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smart
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device
support quick searching while
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student
unable to
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understand
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lecturer
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question
, such as,
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student
can
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find
science research relevant to their
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question
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just
in one touch. The second
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reason
is that this
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device
with rapid loading of the Internet and cloud system are
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able
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help
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share
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immediately to
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class
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full
course e
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very
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instead
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In conclusion
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think
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smart
handheld is
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unneccesary
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used
in the classroom
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because
of it
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negative
impact To The
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lesson
,
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i
till hold the belief that the
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important
and utility of smartphones cannot replace it out the moment There are
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some
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compliment
from
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lecturers
that smartphones not
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allowed
in the
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class
since they
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ruined
the
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lesson
.
Hence
, the other perspective that
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Smart
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devices
is supportive to the
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learning
progress in the
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class
. While I
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understand
why
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some
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people
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suppont
the
first
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view
, I am
still
in
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favour
with of the second opinion,
thus
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student
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able
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their
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smart
phones to interact with new kind of lesson.

Those
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who
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believe
that
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student
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bring
handhelds into
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classnoom
is not
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allowed
may have
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. During their
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point
of
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view
,
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smart
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devices
as
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iphomes
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ruined
the
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class
spirit since
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many
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student
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nowaday
are distracted
by entertaining and
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Social
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medias
platforms which available on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
handheld.
That is
the
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reason
why they
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lost
focused on studying.
For instance
, in university, there are
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many
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Student
sneaky play mobile games
instead
following the
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lecturen
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lesson
,
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so
when
being asked
about the topic, they
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find
difficulty to answer and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
Zeno mark from the angry
Possible spelling mistake found.
reachers
. Another
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point
is that the
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connection between
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student
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teacher
is
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lost
. As
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Student
suffering
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social
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media
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
,
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the the
voice of the lectures is
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lost
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it might
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seperase
the understanding between them.
Nevertheless
,
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i
still
side with those
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who
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believe
that using Smartphones
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bring
valuation while
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learning
. Chief among
The verb 'is' is singular. Did you mean: "This is" or "these am", "these are", "these aren"?
these is
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
support quick searching while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
unable to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
understand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lecturer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
question
, such as,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
science research relevant to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
question
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
in one touch. The second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
is that this
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device
with rapid loading of the Internet and cloud system are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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reacher
share
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full scourse
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suflabus
immediately to
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student
.
For example
, Whole
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
using Google Drive together then,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lecturer
sharing
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full
course e
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
bock, slide,
Possible spelling mistake found.
syllasbus
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
comfortable way
instead
of spending to print it down or waste time to
Possible spelling mistake found.
rell
it for their
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student


In conclusion
, despite acknowledging why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smart
handheld is
Possible spelling mistake found.
unneccesary
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in the classroom
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact To The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lesson
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
till hold the belief that the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
and utility of smartphones cannot replace it out the moment
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IELTS essay Smartphones should not be used in classrooms

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
701 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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