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People in my family.there are 4 people in my family

People in my family. there are 4 people in my family Wq5Wq

there are four people in my family. Father, mother elder sister and me. But the people who I love this is mother. She has name Tam, now she is thirty six year old. She was born in BS village. My mother has oval face, long black hair. She short and thin. My mother is working at company in DN. But the COVID 19 made her at home. Next, my father is a strong man. He is forty but he look like young. Now, he is builting a new home in LT. the house very big

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are four This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in my family. Father, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 elder sister and me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 this is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
. She has Use past participle here: "named".named
name
 Tam, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 she is This word is normally spelled with hyphen.thirty-six
thirty six
 year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. She was born
 in BS village. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 has oval face, long black hair. She short and thin. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is working at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in DN. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
COVID 19
 made her at home. Next
, my father is a strong This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. He is forty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "looks", "looked".lookslooked
look
 like young. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, he is Possible spelling mistake found.buildingboostingquiltingbuiltin g
builting
 a new home in LT. the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big