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People in my family.there are 4 people in my family

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there are four people in my family. Father, mother elder sister and me. But the people who I love this is mother. She has name Tam, now she is thirty six year old. She was born in BS village. My mother has oval face, long black hair. She short and thin. My mother is working at company in DN. But the COVID 19 made her at home. Next, my father is a strong man. He is forty but he look like young. Now, he is builting a new home in LT. the house very big
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people
in my family. Father,
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elder sister and me.
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who I
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mother
. She has
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name
Tam,
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now
she is
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thirty six
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. She
was born
in BS village. My
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mother
has oval face, long black hair. She short and thin. My
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mother
is working at
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company
in DN.
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But
the
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COVID 19
made her at home.
Next
, my father is a strong
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man
. He is forty
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but
he
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look
like young.
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Now
, he is
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builting
a new home in LT. the
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house
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very
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big

IELTS essay People in my family. there are 4 people in my family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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