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Money has always been an essential factor in human’s life

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Money has always been an essential factor in human’s life, however, most people do not consider it as a mean of happiness. Different people have their own opinions about being happy that makes it tough to define. There are plenty of ways for people to achieve pleasure. On the one hand, it is clearly apparent that happiness is a personal’s feeling which can not be measured by any types of measurement. Moreover, it is not something that people can see from their eyes or hold by their hands. It might not be the same to all individuals because of the uncertain enjoyment of people to a common object or aspect. To take an obvious example, dolls are likely to make a baby girl happy except from boys or fully grown adults. Therefore, defining happiness is hard due to vary personal’s opinion. However, there are several ways that can be possible for people to apply with a view to achieving pleasure. The reality is that people feel happy when they do something they are interested in and reaching their setting goals. This is mainly due to the fact that they do not feel stress or exhausted when doing work they are passionate and the satisfying of achieving something they desire is immesurable. To illustrate, taking ielts certification gives me satisfaction as I have imagined.
Money has always been an essential factor in human’s life,
however
, most
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people
do not consider it as a mean of happiness.
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Different
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people
have their
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own
opinions about being happy that
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makes
it tough to define. There are
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plenty
of ways for
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people
to achieve pleasure.

On the one hand, it is
clearly
apparent that happiness is a personal’s feeling which can not
be measured
by any types of measurement.
Moreover
, it is not something that
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people
can
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see
from their eyes or hold by their hands. It might not be the same to all individuals
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because
of the uncertain enjoyment of
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people
to a common object or aspect. To take an obvious example, dolls are likely to
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make
a baby girl happy except from boys or
fully
grown adults.
Therefore
, defining happiness is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
due to vary personal’s opinion.

However
, there are several ways that can be possible for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to apply with a view to achieving pleasure. The reality is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
feel happy when they do something they
are interested
in and reaching their setting goals. This is
mainly
due to the fact that they do not feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
or exhausted when doing work they are passionate and the satisfying of achieving something they desire is
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immesurable
. To illustrate, taking
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ielts
certification gives me satisfaction as I have imagined.
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IELTS essay Money has always been an essential factor in human’s life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
223 words
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