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smartphones make our lives better

smartphones make our lives better BgLAX

It seems like smartphones make our lives better. The mobile phone is the most important thing that we have ever known before. In my point of view, there are three reasons which I really love my cell phone and I would like to dsecribe my opinions. Firstly, the smartphones makes our lives easier because we can send messages by the phones instead of sending letters by mails Secondly, we can read latest news update from social media applications and it is more convenient than reading a newspaper. However, the blue light from the mobile phones can be harm our eyes when we use if for long time. In sammary, I agree with the sentence "smartphones make our lives better". Even now we have new innovation that greater than the smartphones, but I still like to use it.

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make
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lives
 better.

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phone
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important
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before
.

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love
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phone
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dsecribe
 my opinions.

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because
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send
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phones
instead
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Secondly
, we can read A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".the latest
latest
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However
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use
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now
 we have new innovation that greater than the smartphones, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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use
 it. 