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Smartest phone on all the world I have

Smartest phone on all the world I have lq8Q9
I have a fast smartphone that I like it too much. First, My smartphone makes my life so easy because it arranges my due dates and reminds me early before every once to be ready. Second, it is saving my times and my money which is an amazing thing about my cell phone. My mobile gives me the ability to scan any important document at any time in any situation in any place and save it as a PDF file. I am obsessed with the phone, so I never leave my home without it.
I have a
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fast
smartphone that I like it too much.
First
, My smartphone
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makes
my life
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so
easy
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because
it arranges my due dates and reminds me early
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before
every once to be ready. Second, it is saving my times and my money which is an amazing thing about my cell phone. My mobile gives me the ability to scan any
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
document at any time in any situation in any place and save it as a PDF file. I
am obsessed
with the phone,
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so
I never
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leave
my home without it.

IELTS essay Smartest phone on all the world I have

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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