Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

smart way of solving rubics cube

smart way of solving rubics cube jbGja
well, Problems are one of the integral aspect of life which escalate our way of approaching a problem and those who tackle the problem with tremendous hard work will get success in life. However, I would like to a discuss about one of my friend Raj, who is outstanding in solving mathematical problems. In fact, his thought process and brilliance in solving problem are out of the world but I would like to share the one incident that amazed me, and it was solving the puzzle of Rubik's Cube. One day, I visited his house and he was busy with his experiment of solving rubics cube. After the experiment he discussed the new idea. The result of the experiment was that he made his own algorithm which contain only 12 steps to solve the cube puzzle where the first 8 step will solve the 3 sides of the cube and in addition last 4step will solve the balance area. In my view point it was one of the smart and easy technique to crack the puzzle. Moreover, I was amazed the way he teach the new algorithm and the time he took to solve it were very short. After finding his algorithm, solving rubics cube was like a piece of cake. Recently, i shared the algorithm with my cousin brother and after studying the technique, he was over the moon. When i saw my brother's cheerful face i felt like missing my friend who gone for his master's abroad. Overall his technique was very easy to execute and beginner friendly but it didn’t catch that much popularity in our school days. In fact everyone shows a disinclination towards solving rubics cube.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
well
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Problems
are one of the integral aspect of life which escalate our way of approaching a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
and those who tackle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
with tremendous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
success in life.

However
, I would like to a
Did you mean simply "discuss one"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about one
of my friend Raj, who is outstanding in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
mathematical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
. In fact, his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
process and brilliance in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
are out of the world
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would like to share the one incident that amazed me, and it was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
the puzzle of Rubik's Cube. One day, I visited his
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
house and
he was busy with his experiment of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
Possible spelling mistake found.
rubics
cube.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
the experiment he discussed the new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
. The result of the experiment was that he made his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
algorithm
which contain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
12 steps to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solve
the cube puzzle where the
first
8 step will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solve
the 3 sides of the cube and
in addition
last 4step will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solve
the balance area. In my view point it was one of the smart and easy technique to crack the puzzle.
Moreover
, I
was amazed
the way he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "teaches", "taught".
teach
the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
algorithm
and the time he took to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solve
it were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
short. After finding his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
algorithm
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
Possible spelling mistake found.
rubics
cube was like a piece of cake.

Recently,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
shared the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
algorithm
with my cousin brother and after studying the technique, he was over the moon. When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
my brother's cheerful face
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
felt like missing my friend who gone for his master's abroad.
Overall
his technique was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
easy to execute and beginner friendly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it didn’t catch that much popularity in our school days. In fact everyone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
a disinclination towards
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solving
Possible spelling mistake found.
rubics
cube.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay smart way of solving rubics cube

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts