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The given picture illustrates the site of Southwest airport now and how it will be presented after development in next year over it is used it that they are my heart of changes that will be seen after read when I went there will be more gates and more imaginative at the fleeting glance it is crystal clear that in present there are only 88 sin airport whereas in security passport control only cafe and at check-in area is there further there is a walk way in which we know there is only one departure and arrival gate more over after the development there will be more gates were other than age there only eating gates with this kind apart from these undisputed passport area check in area and a cafe will be will get replaced by backdrop and second respectively for the more on you cafe will be open in Southwest side of airport what is more under passport control customs zone ATM will be built in southeast side while in front of ATM again the cafe is there in addition to its there will be to departure as well as arrival gate last but not the least a car hire area will be opened in southeast of airport
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picture illustrates the site of Southwest
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airport
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now
and how it will
be presented
after development in
next
year over it is
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used
it that they are my heart of
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changes
that will be
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seen
after read when I went there will be more
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gates
and more imaginative at the fleeting glance it is crystal
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clear
that in present there are
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only
88 sin
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airport
whereas in security passport control
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only
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cafe
and at
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check
-in
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area
is there
further
there is a walk way in which we know there is
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only
one departure and arrival
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gate
more over after the development there will be more
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gates
were other than age there
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only
eating
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gates
with this kind apart from these undisputed passport
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area
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check
in
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area
and a
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cafe
will be will
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get
replaced by backdrop and second
respectively
for the more on you
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cafe
will be open in Southwest side of
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airport
what is more
under passport control customs zone ATM will
be built
in southeast side while in front of ATM again the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
is there
in addition
to its there will be to departure
as well
as arrival
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gate
last
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not the least a car hire
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area
will
be opened
in southeast of
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IELTS essay Site of southwest airport

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
209 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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