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Since the creation of man, teachers have been among the most respectful people of each society. Today, most people wonder whether teachers received more respects from their students in the past or not. In my opinion, students respected teachers more in th v.1

Since the creation of man, teachers have been among the most respectful people of each society. Today, most people wonder whether teachers received more respects from their students in the past or not. In my opinion, students respected teachers more in th v. 1
In recent years, individuals in any part of the are residing in a "throw-away" environment which implies that individuals use and dispose items too quickly after a short time of use. This essay would first discuss its causes, its problems and also what can be done to curb the situation. The first cause of this would be the increase in the income of persons. In recent times, salary earners have received a higher pay check than in previous years, this enables them to dispose things easily because of the mindset that they are easily replaceable. For example, a Family earning about $2, 000 a month would be more conservative than another that earns about $20, 000 a month. This may lead to high disposal of household items since there are enough funds to replace them at any given time. The second case would be ignorant about recycling, most people are unaware that unwanted things can be recycled, plastic bottles can be submitted to agencies for recycling, which means that these things can be treated, re-shaped and be used again. This may result in inflation of goods costs if the resources used to produce these commodities are limited. Let us take pet bottle companies as a case study, industries would keep the price of their commodity low if they need not to produce the items from the start if they have to recycle. To curb the situation, the Government should educate persons about recycling rather than disposing. They should create centres, programs and adverts that promotes and supports non-disposal. With all these being done, families would reduce their "throw-away" habit, even though it can be more stressful to recycle. In other parts of the World where kids are taught from a young age about recycling, the have recorded more success in non-disposal and this has also deflated the cost of goods and other commodities. In conclusion, with the increase in "throw-away" habit of persons in recent times, the Government need to set policies on curbing that idea, although persons also need to put in efforts to mitigate it so as to make the society better for all. What do you think?
In recent years, individuals in any part of
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the are
residing in a
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throw-away
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environment which implies that individuals
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use
and dispose items too
quickly
after a short
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time
of
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use
. This essay would
first
discuss its causes, its problems and
also
what can
be done
to curb the situation.

The
first
cause of this would be the increase in the income of
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persons
. In recent
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times
, salary earners have received a higher pay
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check
than in previous years, this enables them to dispose things
easily
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because
of the mindset that they are
easily
replaceable.
For example
, a Family earning about $2, 000 a month would be more conservative than another that earns about $20, 000 a month. This may lead to high disposal of household items since there are
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enough
funds to replace them at any
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given
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time
. The second case would be ignorant about
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recycling
, most
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people
are unaware that unwanted things can
be recycled
, plastic bottles can
be submitted
to agencies for
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recycling
, which means that these things can
be treated
, re-shaped and be
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used
again. This may result in inflation of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
costs if the resources
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used
to produce these commodities
are limited
.
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Let
us take pet bottle
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companies
as a case study, industries would
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keep
the price of their commodity low if they need not
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to produce
the items from the
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start
if they
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have to
recycle.

To curb the situation, the
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Government
should educate
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persons
about
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recycling
rather
than disposing. They should create
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centres
, programs and adverts that promotes and supports non-disposal. With all these
being done
, families would
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reduce
their
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"
throw-away
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habit,
even though
it can be more stressful to recycle. In other parts of the World where kids
are taught
from a young age about
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recycling
, the have recorded more success in non-disposal and this has
also
deflated the cost of
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goods
and other commodities.

In conclusion
, with the increase in
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"
throw-away
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"
habit of
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persons
in recent
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times
, the
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Government
need to set policies on curbing that
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idea
, although
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persons
also
need to put in efforts to mitigate it
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so as to
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make
the society better for all. What do you
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think
?
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Since the creation of man, teachers have been among the most respectful people of each society. Today, most people wonder whether teachers received more respects from their students in the past or not. In my opinion, students respected teachers more in th v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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