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Since most information about history and culture is found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

Since most information about history and culture is found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. b9JX

In addition, museums buttress economical development in the city. To explain it in detail, the fees collected from visitors of museums would increase the revenue of the government. It is not only a source of income for the government, but also provides entertainment to some people. Historical museum buildings attract a plethora of visitors. For instance, science and industry museum in Chicago attracted 1 million visitors last year. This increased the popularity of Chicago around the world. From what have been discussed above, I strongly disagree with the idea that museums are not required. In my opinion, the internet will never be able to physically show things. Museums provide true representation of history, culture and religion which would not be possible with internet.

In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 buttress Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?economic
economical
 development in the city. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 it in detail, the fees collected from visitors of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 would increase the revenue of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. It is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a source of income for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 provides entertainment to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 buildings attract a plethora of visitors. For instance
, science and industry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 in Chicago attracted 1 million visitors last year. This increased the popularity of Chicago around the world.

From what have been discussed
 above, I strongly
 disagree with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 are not required. In my opinion, the internet will never be able to physically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 things. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museums
 provide true representation of history, culture and religion which would not be possible with internet. 