Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are important for a country. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are important for a country. kode
It is argued that many governments consider economic progress to be the overarching priority for a country while others suggest that other priorities should be taken into account. Personally, I cannot fully support the idea that economic progress trumps everything else. Although, the economy will always be the foundation of any state, of equal importance are the quality of life experienced by its citizens. One main benefit of prioritising economic growth above all else is that without a growing economy it is difficult to improve living standards and invest in public services. To illustrate, when an economy is performing well, we are likely to see more investment, a greater number of new businesses, and a rise in wages. A lot of this will be reinvested back into the economy through consumer spending, and taxation from both increased wages and spending can be used to invest in locals facilities like hospitals and schools. A good example of this would be Vietnam, which has enjoyed unprecedented developments in economic progress and lifestyles since it joined the WTO in 2007. Despite these arguments, it is easy to see that standard of living itself is hugely beneficial. Although a well-performing economy will make good headlines on the evening news, the benefits might not be felt by everybody. Economic inequality in countries like the UK is widening, besides reasonable levels of growth. The is made worse by authorities cuts to public services, with hospitals and schools at breaking point. This demonstrates that is not adequate to merely focus on having a strong economy, but it is also about what you do with it. In conclusion, I cannot completely stand with the idea that government should prioritise the economy over other areas. Economic stability is incredibly essential but the administration has a duty to ensure citizens can access high-quality public services and are paid reasonable goods. Unfortunately, the majority of western governments are failing to achieve this.
It
is argued
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
consider
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
progress to be the overarching priority for a country while others suggest that other priorities should
be taken
into account.
Personally
, I cannot
fully
support the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
progress trumps everything else. Although, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
will always be the foundation of any state, of equal importance are the quality of life experienced by its citizens.

One main benefit of
Possible spelling mistake. 'prioritising' is British English.
prioritising
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
growth
above all
else is that without a growing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
it is difficult to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
living standards and invest in public services. To illustrate, when an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
is performing well, we are likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
more investment, a greater number of new businesses, and a rise in wages.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
A lot of
this will
be reinvested
back into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
through consumer spending, and taxation from both increased wages and spending can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to invest in locals facilities like hospitals and schools. A
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
example of this would be Vietnam, which has enjoyed unprecedented developments in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
progress and lifestyles since it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
the WTO in 2007.

Despite these arguments, it is easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that standard of living itself is
hugely
beneficial. Although a well-performing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
headlines
The usual preposition for "evening" is 'in' not "on". Try it like this: "in the evening".
on the evening
news, the benefits might not
be felt
by everybody.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Economic
inequality in countries like the UK is widening,
besides
reasonable levels of growth. The
is made
worse by authorities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cuts
to public services, with hospitals and schools at breaking point. This demonstrates
that is
not adequate to
merely
focus on having a strong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
also
about what you do with it.

In conclusion
, I cannot completely stand with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
Possible spelling mistake. 'prioritise' is British English.
prioritise
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
over other areas.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Economic
stability is
incredibly
essential
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the administration has a duty to ensure citizens can access high-quality public services and
are paid
reasonable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
. Unfortunately, the majority of western
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
are failing to achieve this.

IELTS essay Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are important for a country.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are important for a country. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.