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Since most information about history and culture is found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

Since most information about history and culture is found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. PllE

Child labour refers to the employment of children in any work that deprives them of their childhood, interferes with their ability to attend regular school, and that is mentally, physically, socially or morally dangerous and harmful. In villages, it is a common sight to see children of poor families working in fields or elsewhere to contribute to the family income. Such children are deprived of opportunities of education and are also prone to health risks. In a sense, child labour is open exploitation as it deprives children of education and pushes them into exploitative situations. The side-effects of working at a young age are: risks of contracting occupational diseases like skin diseases, diseases of the lungs, weak eyesight, TB etc. ; vulnerability to sexual exploitation at the workplace; deprived of education. They grow up unable to avail development opportunities and end up as unskilled workers for the rest of their lives.

Child Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 refers to the employment of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in any work that deprives them of their childhood, interferes with their ability to attend regular school, and that is
 mentally, physically
, socially
 or morally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 and harmful. In villages, it is a common sight to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 of poor families working in fields or elsewhere to contribute to the family income. Such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
are deprived
 of opportunities of education and are also
 prone to health This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
.

In a sense, child Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 is open exploitation as it deprives You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 of education and pushes them into exploitative situations. The Did you mean "side effects" (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.side effects
side-effects
 of working at a young age are: This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
 of contracting occupational diseases like skin diseases, diseases of the lungs, weak eyesight, TB etc. ; vulnerability to sexual exploitation at the workplace; deprived of education. They grow up unable to avail development opportunities and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up as unskilled workers for the rest of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. 