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Some people to prefer to live in a house, while others feel there are more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house as compared with living in an apartment?

Some people to prefer to live in a house, while others feel there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house as compared with living in an apartment? bddl
Each and every individual has difference in taste. regarding residing in a well-constructed home or living in a flat. The choice to find a place for living depends on various factors such as cost or location. In this essay, we will discuss the merits of living in an apartment over a home. Having an own villa to live in is certainly a dream to achieve due to various factors. First and the foremost, is privacy, which is an essential basic right of any human being. People own the area to themselves and are their own bosses on how to live their lives, that is why all affluent and rich people prefer their own bungalows. Secondly, there is a sense of accomplishment which can be enjoyed from living in own house. Whereas, benefits of sharing a space are no less. No one can deny the advantage of Zed plus security being provided in a flat which allows to have one a sound sleep. People can leave their house unattended for as many days they want, without giving a second thought. Not only security but various other issues like water supply, electricity supply and other minor issues are in the hands of management by just lodging a formal complaint. Moreover, it also leads to much sociable life. Whenever in dire need, its only neighbours who comes to the rescue. A person next door is more accessible than a person living next building. Further it provides platform to the children to engage in outdoor activities as these amenities are available in an apartment whereas children living in home usually play on streets which is grave concern for parents. Considering these many factors, many old age people sell their ancestral homes to enjoy facilities offered in an apartment. To conclude, I would say, that it completely depends on one’s preference whether to stay in a house or a flat but the luxury derived from apartments outweighs from detached homes. Hence, one should not overlook these factors while making a decision.
Each and every individual has difference in taste.
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regarding
residing in a well-constructed home or
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living
in a flat. The choice to find a place for
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living
depends on various
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factors
such as cost or location. In this essay, we will discuss the merits of
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living
in an apartment over a home.

Having an
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own
villa to
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live
in is
certainly
a dream to achieve due to various
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factors
.
First
and the foremost, is privacy, which is an essential basic right of any human being.
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People
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own
the area to themselves and are their
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own
bosses on how to
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live
their
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lives
,
that is
why all affluent and rich
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people
prefer their
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own
bungalows.
Secondly
, there is a sense of accomplishment which can
be enjoyed
from
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living
in
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own
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house
.

Whereas, benefits of sharing a space are no less. No one can deny the advantage of Zed plus security
being provided
in a flat which
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allows
to have one a sound sleep.
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People
can
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leave
their
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house
unattended for as
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days they want, without giving a second
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thought
. Not
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only
security
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various other issues like water supply, electricity supply and other minor issues are in the hands of management by
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just
lodging a formal complaint.

Moreover
, it
also
leads
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to
much sociable life. Whenever in dire need, its
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only
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neighbours
who
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comes
to the rescue. A person
next
door is more accessible than a person
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living
next
building.
Further
it provides platform to the children to engage in outdoor activities as these amenities are available in an apartment whereas children
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living
in home
usually
play on streets which is grave concern for parents. Considering these
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many
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factors
,
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many
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old
age
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people
sell their ancestral
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homes
to enjoy facilities offered in an apartment.

To conclude
, I would say, that it completely depends on one’s preference whether to stay in a
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house
or a flat
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but
the luxury derived from apartments outweighs from detached
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homes
.
Hence
, one should not overlook these
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factors
while making a decision.
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IELTS essay Some people to prefer to live in a house, while others feel there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house as compared with living in an apartment?

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336 words
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