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Should young people like us share the housework? Why?

Should young people like us share the housework? Why? 2Kr1k

In many modern families, young people like us should share the housework with our parents. This helps us develop character and a sense of independence in later life. Because we acquire valuable skills for everyday life. Like helping our mother cook while we were young, it can help us not to have trouble preparing meals for ourselves and our family members. In many modern families, young people like us should share the housework with our parents. This helps us develop character and a sense of independence in later life. Because we acquire valuable skills for everyday life. Like helping our mother cook while we were young, it can help us not to have trouble preparing meals for ourselves and our family members.

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