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Almost everyone has experienced the feeling of passing an exam to enter a school or a company. I am too. I had much fun when I received news passing my dream university.

Almost everyone has experienced the feeling of passing an exam to enter a school or a company. I am too. I had much fun when I received news passing my dream university. GLwYe
Almost everyone has experienced the feeling of passing an exam to enter a school or a company. I am too. I had much fun when I received news passing my dream university. After I completed high school, I chose to continue studying at my present university. In grade 12, I had a hard studying. I tried my best to my dream come true. So when I did it, I had so happy. I celebrated with my family and some close friends. After that, I had a trip to Da Nang to relax with my family. It was like a reward my parents gave me. I visited the destinations that many people recommended in Da Nang. I also tried a lot of foods and bought some souvenirs here. Da Nang City is beautiful and cleansing. Here is also where my friend lives. I was acquainted with that friend when we revised for the university's exam online together. We treasure the time we had together. I really enjoyed my time here. I will always think of that happy moment and continues trying more in the future.
Almost everyone has experienced the feeling of passing an exam to enter a school or a
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. I am too. I had much fun when I received news passing my dream university.

After I completed high school, I chose to continue studying at my present university. In grade 12, I had a
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hard
studying. I tried my best to my dream
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come
true.
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when I did it, I had
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happy. I celebrated with my family and
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some
close friends.

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to relax with my family. It was like a reward my parents gave me. I visited the destinations that
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people
recommended in
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Da
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. I
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tried
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a lot of
foods and
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bought
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some
souvenirs here.
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City is
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beautiful
and cleansing. Here is
also
where my friend
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lives
. I
was acquainted
with that friend when we revised for the university's exam online together. We treasure the time we had together. I
really
enjoyed my time here.

I will always
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think
of that happy moment and continues trying more in the future.
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IELTS essay Almost everyone has experienced the feeling of passing an exam to enter a school or a company. I am too. I had much fun when I received news passing my dream university.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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