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Should we pay money to watch films or listen to music online ?

Should we pay money to watch films or listen to music online? E7V6L
Nowadays, we are enjoying watching movies and listening to music on the Internet freely without paying attention to the hard work of the artists and producers; therefore, I think paying money is a must-have thing for streaming. One of the most important reasons is that if people pay money for these, that means we are contributing to protect their copyright. This is seen as a major motivation for artists continuing to produce better works. Moreover, paying to experience entertainment media makes you become a more responsible netizen, which contributes to creating a civilized community on the Internet.
Nowadays, we are enjoying watching movies and listening to music on the Internet
freely
without paying attention to the
hard
work of the artists and producers;
therefore
, I
think
paying money is a
must
-have thing for streaming. One of the most
important
reasons is that if
people
pay money for these, that means we are contributing to protect their copyright. This is
seen
as a major motivation for artists continuing to produce better works.
Moreover
, paying to experience entertainment media
makes
you become a more responsible netizen, which contributes to creating a civilized community on the Internet.
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IELTS essay Should we pay money to watch films or listen to music online?

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