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Online shopping over internet

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Internet now a days become an essential tool for shopping. Online shopping site are now very common for purchasing items like books, air tickets and other groceries. We know that online purchasing items facilitate human efforts like time, energy, money, travelling cost and many more. Online shopping sites are growing more and more faster with multiple security facility. One can securly purchase items online with available security services. Firewalls are available to provide secure online transaction. We know most of the social networking sites are using users data and recommending them the searched items online. More amd more recommender systems are evolving for recommending the users about latest avilable online items. With online shopping one can not only save time but also the reduced cost is facilitated. One can return the items delivered online by online return policy. Once one have checked the online item then one have to purchase it. One can also schedule the day and time of delivery of the item. This facility become more popular on birthday's, anniversery, openings and other etc. Whenever one had cancelled the order the amout is delivered instanty in the account of user. On the other hand one can retain the facility of cash on delivery if one dosen't want to prepaid. With the advancement of 2 factor security service, all phishing attack and server attack become useless. Government is also promoting more and more online services like emails, adhaar card. Examination which are going to be conducted are now converted into online mode. Due to which correction and results are able to delivered on time. On line bussiness products are available for shopping nowdays. Growth of any bussiness is only dependent on the online services provided by it. Like online parking system, online food items, online groceries and etc. Window shopping become very easy on advent of online services. Ministry or government are going to announce the tax decuction on online services. One could select the color, size, texture, shine, quantiy online. One could also be capable to update it in resonable time. Cyber attack is the only disadvantage of online services. Phishing attack or password hacking may lead to disaster for online services. So to take people under confidence online service should be improve.
Internet
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now a days
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become
an essential tool for
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shopping
.
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Online
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shopping
site are
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now
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very
common for purchasing
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items
like books, air tickets and other groceries. We know that
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online
purchasing
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items
facilitate human efforts like
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time
, energy, money, travelling cost and
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many
more.
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Online
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shopping
sites are growing more and
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more faster
with multiple security facility. One can
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securly
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purchase
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items
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online
with available security
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services
. Firewalls are available to provide secure
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online
transaction. We know most of the social networking sites are using users data and recommending them the searched
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items
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online
. More
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amd
more recommender systems are evolving for recommending the users about latest
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avilable
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online
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items
. With
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online
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shopping
one can not
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only
save
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time
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but
also
the
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reduced
cost
is facilitated
. One can return the
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items
delivered
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online
by
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online
return policy.
“Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
one have
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checked
the
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online
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item
then one
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have to
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purchase
it. One can
also
schedule the day and
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time
of delivery of the
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item
. This facility
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become
more popular on birthday's,
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anniversery
, openings and other etc.
“Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whenever
one had cancelled the order the
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amout
is delivered
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instanty
in the account of user.
On the other hand
one can retain the facility of cash on delivery if one
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dosen
't want to
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prepaid
. With the advancement of 2 factor security
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service
, all phishing
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attack
and server
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attack
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become
useless.
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Government
is
also
promoting more and more
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online
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services
like emails,
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adhaar
card. Examination which are going to
be conducted
are
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now
converted into
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online
mode. Due to which correction and results are able to delivered on
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time
. On line
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bussiness
products are available for
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shopping
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nowdays
. Growth of any
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bussiness
is
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only
dependent on the
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online
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services
provided by it. Like
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online
parking system,
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online
food
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items
,
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online
groceries
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and etc
. Window
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shopping
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become
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very
easy on advent of
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online
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services
. Ministry or
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government
are going to announce the tax
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decuction
on
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online
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services
. One could select the color, size, texture, shine,
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quantiy
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online
. One could
also
be capable to update it in
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resonable
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time
. Cyber
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attack
is the
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only
disadvantage of
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online
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services
. Phishing
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attack
or password hacking may lead to disaster for
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online
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services
.
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So
to take
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people
under confidence
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online
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service
should be
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improve
.
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IELTS essay Online shopping over internet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
375 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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