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Describe a difficult decision that you once made

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Intro: -well, its true that everyone make decision in their life, and i think making decision is like a daunting task for everyone, because mostly people make decision with imagination. there are decision we had made and learnt a lot from those decision. some people gain something and some loose in there life with a single thought of decision. I had also made in my life some was good and was worst but learnt a lot from those decisions. among of those I would like to talk about such a decision which i had made and had not felt any regret on that. the decision I had made was related to my study, and had made it five years ago. it was the time when I finished my 10th and thinking for next secondary education. it was the most difficult time for me to choose the relevant stream for my secondary. I also did a imprudent mistake and waste my time. it was the mistake I seek advice from relatives and everyone gave their own ideas. it was only because even did not have idea about any stream what actually it contain. moreover, it took nearly a month decide one stream for my 11th. Somewhere was feeling upset because was afraid to loose my friends as well. every single day was very bad at that time. later on i decided to take advice from my elder brother, who had finished his secondary at that time, I did not felt good ask at that time, because he was busy in his exams, but later on one day, I asked for to help me in that problem. and then first he explained everything about the every stream what it contain, many types are there everything in deeply. after talking with him I decided to with non-medical. after making that decision I felt glad and today a here. so, this was the decision I had made which difficult for me to decide.
Intro: -well, its true that everyone
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make
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decision
in their life, and
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think
making
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decision
is like a daunting task for everyone,
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because
mostly
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people
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make
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decision
with imagination.
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there
are
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decision
we had made and
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learnt
a lot from those
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decision
.
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some
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people
gain something and
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some
loose in there life with a single
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thought
of
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decision
. I had
also
made in my life
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some
was
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good
and was worst
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but
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learnt
a lot from those
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decisions
.
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among
of those I would like to talk about such a
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decision
which
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i
had made and had not felt any regret on that.
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the
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decision
I had made
was related
to my study, and had made it five years ago.
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it
was the
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time
when I finished my 10th and thinking for
next
secondary education.
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it
was the most difficult
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time
for me to choose the relevant
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stream
for my secondary. I
also
did
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a
imprudent mistake and waste my
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time
.
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it
was the mistake I seek advice from relatives and everyone gave their
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own
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ideas
.
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it
was
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only
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because
even did not have
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idea
about any
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stream
what actually it
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contain
.
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moreover
, it took
nearly
a month decide one
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stream
for my 11th. Somewhere was feeling upset
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because
was afraid to
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loose
my friends
as well
.
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every
single day was
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bad
at that
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time
.
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later
on
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i
decided to take advice from my elder brother, who had finished his secondary at that
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time
, I did not
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felt
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ask at that
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,
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he was busy in his exams,
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later on one day, I
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asked for
to
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help
me in that problem.
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and
then
first
he
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explained
everything about the every
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stream
what it
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contain
,
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many
types are there everything in
deeply
.
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after
talking with him I decided to with non-medical.
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after
making that
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decision
I felt glad and
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today
a here.
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so
, this was the
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decision
I had made which difficult for me to decide.
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IELTS essay Describe a difficult decision that you once made

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
329 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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