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I plan to establish an English center in the future. It will be called Happy Land. Because I want to convey the excitement of learning a new language, particularly English. Being a hue associated with purity and elegance, bright colors might help us attract clients which are almost children. In addition, I think that my land differs from other centers. We will combine to build an instant store which my mother will stay to sell. Therefore, my students will have something to recharge at breaktime. I think that our fees and courses will delight parents. Obviously, I regularly ask foreign teachers to teach some of the classes so that the kids will interact with a native speaker. This will aid in the development of all skills, particularly communication. In conclusion, I feel that our company will become more renowned and prosperous.

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