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My school is called vinschool . I have been studying here since I started in 3rd grade.

My school is called vinschool. I have been studying here since I started in 3rd grade. obpDB
My school is called vinschool. I have been studying here since I started in 3rd grade. It can be said that vinschool is a great learning environment. There are really many social subjects that have helped me to have more knowledge than typically GCED or CLISE. But what I like most about this place is that the homework is really just enough not too much which makes me feel comfortable and not too pressured in terms of overtime. Not only that, my teachers and friends have helped me a lot so I have a group of 5 players who are very close to me. in vinschool really a lot of different extracurricular activities but unfortunately i am a person who does not like to participate in extracurricular activities, however, i will join if i really want to or it is my forte like last year's drawing competition I won third place, and I was very surprised by that. And in my opinion if I had to choose to change anything, I hope the school will change in the quality of the food, not just me. I've heard a lot of complaints about the food being too cold and sometimes too salty. If I remember correctly, there was a time when my friend went to get food because he was allergic to onions, so he asked the kitchen waiter to remove the onions. I don't know if they can hear it or not but in the end when my friend opened the bowl of food it had onions in it. The line for food was very long and we couldn't go back to exchange it. At the end we had to use a spoon to scoop it out and it took a long time. But whatever, for me vinschool is a very good and I feel very happy to study here It can be said that vinschool is a great learning environment. There are really many social subjects that have helped me to have more knowledge than typically GCED or CLISE. But what I like most about this place is that the homework is really just enough not too much which makes me feel comfortable and not too pressured in terms of overtime. Not only that, my teachers and friends have helped me a lot so I have a group of 5 players who are very close to me. in vinschool really a lot of different extracurricular activities but unfortunately i am a person who does not like to participate in extracurricular activities, however, i will join if i really want to or it is my forte like last year's drawing competition I won third place, and I was very surprised by that. And in my opinion if I had to choose to change anything, I hope the school will change in the quality of the food, not just me. I've heard a lot of complaints about the food being too cold and sometimes too salty. If I remember correctly, there was a time when my friend went to get food because he was allergic to onions, so he asked the kitchen waiter to remove the onions. I don't know if they can hear it or not but in the end when my friend opened the bowl of food it had onions in it. The line for food was very long and we couldn't go back to exchange it. At the end we had to use a spoon to scoop it out and it took a long time. But whatever, for me vinschool is a very good and I feel very happy to study here
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vinschool
is a great learning environment. There are
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many
social subjects that have
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helped
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what I like most about this
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is that the homework is
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just
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enough
not too much which
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makes
me
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feel
comfortable and not too pressured in terms of overtime. Not
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only
that, my teachers and
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friends
have
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vinschool
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a
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lot
of
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but
unfortunately
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am a person
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activities
,
however
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will
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join
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really
want to or it is my forte like last year's drawing competition I won third
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place
, and I was
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very
surprised by that. And in my opinion if I had to choose to
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change
anything, I hope the school will
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change
in the quality of the
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food
, not
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just
me. I've heard a
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lot
of complaints about the
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food
being too
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cold
and
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sometimes
too salty. If I remember
correctly
, there was a
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when my
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friend
went to
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get
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food
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because
he was allergic to onions,
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he asked the kitchen waiter to remove the onions. I don't know if they can hear it or not
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but
in the
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end
when my
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friend
opened the bowl of
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food
it had onions in it. The line for
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food
was
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very
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long and
we couldn't go back to exchange it. At the
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end
we had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a spoon to scoop it out and it took a
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long
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time
.
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But
whatever, for me
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vinschool
is a
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very
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good
and I
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feel
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very
happy to study
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It can
be said
that
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vinschool
is a great learning environment. There are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
social subjects that have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to have more knowledge than
typically
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GCED
or
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CLISE
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
what I like most about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
is that the homework is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
not too much which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
comfortable and not too pressured in terms of overtime. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
that, my teachers and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lot
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I have a group of 5 players
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
close to me. in
Possible spelling mistake found.
vinschool
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lot
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extracurricular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
unfortunately
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am a person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
does not like to participate in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extracurricular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
,
however
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
if
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
want to or it is my forte like last year's drawing competition I won third
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
, and I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
surprised by that. And in my opinion if I had to choose to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
anything, I hope the school will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
in the quality of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
me. I've heard a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lot
of complaints about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
being too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
too salty. If I remember
correctly
, there was a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
when my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
went to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
he was allergic to onions,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
he asked the kitchen waiter to remove the onions. I don't know if they can hear it or not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
end
when my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
opened the bowl of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
it had onions in it. The line for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
long and
we couldn't go back to exchange it. At the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
end
we had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a spoon to scoop it out and it took a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
whatever, for me
Possible spelling mistake found.
vinschool
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy to study
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
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IELTS essay My school is called vinschool. I have been studying here since I started in 3rd grade.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
603 words
5.5
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