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Should we ban homework: does homework promote learning?

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Homework may be a friend that goes with us during our childhood. Some students want it to disappear but have they ever thought about the importance of each homework. Frankly speaking, actually homework is really necessary to promote our learning. Now teachers often give us homework after each lesson because of its benefits. First, it helps us review the knowledge in the last lesson. It's so great since some students usually don't see books again, they can't remember all the knowledge. But for homework, Students will open books to search for recipes. Second, difficult exercises promote learning. The process we try to solve is that we study ourselves. We can raise our standard. Homework is a teacher that never tells us off. Why did you hate it? It helps us a lot. Let's imagine one day there is not any homework for us. We will have more free time. But at that time, what can you do, or you only play games, . . . ? Maybe you see your books again, but there are only recipes, we don't have exercises to practice. Besides, homework should probably be given that students both have enough free time for relaxing and can complete all exercises. If you have understood all I said, let's do your homework in happiness. Don't dislike homework. It can bring you success.
Homework
may be a friend that goes with us during our childhood.
Some
students
want it to disappear
but
have they ever
thought
about the importance of each
homework
.
Frankly
speaking, actually
homework
is
really
necessary to promote our learning.
Now
teachers
often
give us
homework
after each lesson
because
of its benefits.
First
, it
helps
us review the knowledge in the last lesson. It's
so
great since
some
students
usually
don't
see
books again, they can't remember all the knowledge.
But
for
homework
,
Students
will open books to search for recipes. Second, difficult exercises promote learning. The process we try to solve is that we study ourselves. We can raise our standard.
Homework
is a teacher that never
tells
us off. Why did you hate it? It
helps
us a lot.
Let
's imagine one day there is not any
homework
for us. We will have more free time.
But
at that time, what can you do, or you
only
play games
, .
.
.
? Maybe you
see
your books again,
but
there are
only
recipes, we don't have exercises to practice.
Besides
,
homework
should
probably
be
given
that
students
both have
enough
free time for relaxing and can complete all exercises. If you have understood all I said,
let
's do your
homework
in happiness. Don't dislike
homework
. It can bring you success.
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IELTS essay Should we ban homework: does homework promote learning?

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