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University sports center developed and redevelopment plan.

University sports center developed and redevelopment plan. YdjkV

The first picture shows the current layout of University Sports Centre, and the second picture illustrates the predicted outline of University Sports Centre. The present Sports Centre has only one swimming pool of 25 m, along with changing room and seating in the western and eastern sides of pool respectively. There are also a gym, a reception and two outdoor courts. In future plans, this basic structure is not changed much except for the two outdoor courts. A new sports hall on the eastern side, next to seating will be built. On its immediate east a dance studio is also planed to construct. Apart from the existing one, two more changing rooms are also going to be built at the southeast and southwest direction. A sports shop and a café separated by an entrance accompanies the southwest and southeast changing rooms respectively. Finally, one more big leisure pool is predicted to form in the western side. Overall, the future sports centre will have new facilities but will not have the outdoor courts.

The first
 picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 layout of University You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
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Centre
, and the second picture illustrates the predicted outline of University You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
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Centre
.

The present You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
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Centre
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one swimming pool of 25 m, along with changing room and seating in the western and eastern sides of pool respectively
. There are also
 a gym, a reception and two outdoor courts. In future plans, this basic structure is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 much This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the two outdoor courts. A new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall on the eastern side, next
 to seating will be built
. On its immediate east a dance studio is also
 planed to construct. Apart from the existing one, two more changing rooms are also
 going to be built
 at the southeast and southwest direction. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop and a café separated by an entrance accompanies the southwest and southeast changing rooms respectively
. Finally
, one more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 leisure pool is predicted
 to form in the western side.

Overall
, the future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
 will have new facilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 will not have the outdoor courts. 