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University sports center developed and redevelopment plan.

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The first picture shows the current layout of University Sports Centre, and the second picture illustrates the predicted outline of University Sports Centre. The present Sports Centre has only one swimming pool of 25 m, along with changing room and seating in the western and eastern sides of pool respectively. There are also a gym, a reception and two outdoor courts. In future plans, this basic structure is not changed much except for the two outdoor courts. A new sports hall on the eastern side, next to seating will be built. On its immediate east a dance studio is also planed to construct. Apart from the existing one, two more changing rooms are also going to be built at the southeast and southwest direction. A sports shop and a café separated by an entrance accompanies the southwest and southeast changing rooms respectively. Finally, one more big leisure pool is predicted to form in the western side. Overall, the future sports centre will have new facilities but will not have the outdoor courts.
The
first
picture
shows
the
current
layout of University
Sports
Centre
, and the second picture illustrates the predicted outline of University
Sports
Centre
.

The present
Sports
Centre
has
only
one swimming pool of 25 m, along with changing room and seating in the western and eastern sides of pool
respectively
. There are
also
a gym, a reception and two outdoor courts. In future plans, this basic structure is not
changed
much
except for
the two outdoor courts. A new
sports
hall on the eastern side,
next
to seating will
be built
. On its immediate east a dance studio is
also
planed to construct. Apart from the existing one, two more changing rooms are
also
going to
be built
at the southeast and southwest direction. A
sports
shop and a café separated by an entrance accompanies the southwest and southeast changing rooms
respectively
.
Finally
, one more
big
leisure pool
is predicted
to form in the western side.

Overall
, the future
sports
centre
will have new facilities
but
will not have the outdoor courts.
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IELTS essay University sports center developed and redevelopment plan.

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