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Should students pay for their tution fees

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Nowadays, it is a norm for people to think that students don’t do not have to pay any fee for their learning. However, others consider the payment to be the responsibility of each student. In my opinion, both qualities are of great significance in equal measure, and I will further elaborate in this essay. To embark on, there are various reasons why tuition exemptions are essential. There are many students who are disadvantaged and they can’t can not afford all the expenses fees at school. However they are qualified to become a productive worker and contribute to the economy of the country. And tax increases increasing are obliged to recoup that such tuition, giving more students the opportunity to complete college program, and this will put students in good stead and join hands in order to reduce the illiteracy build well-trained workforce On the other hand, paying their fee autonomously is significant in view of their study. Unless they pay for that tuition, they won’t will not obtain unevenly the college and the vocational college. This action leads to them becoming a financial burden on the government's budget. Besides, the college doesn’t does not have enough money to upgrade their infrastructure and therefore teaching quality is affected too. From a legal perspective, tuition fee plays an essential role in the university and students who can afford it have an edge over students who do not. For instance, a student who can pay tuition can equip himself with the necessary equipment to support his or her own learning and without as many obstacles as others. From my perspective, students who are less fortunate can loan money from the bank to pay for their tuition, which is just a temporary solution but it helps everyone build an egalitarian society and ensure that all students can capture all the lessons balancedly. To capitulate, it is a privilege that we are in the modern world where the poor still have incentives and opportunities to win their own scholarships. . Instead, colleges and universities should pay attention to universities their studentst and help them to get a vocation in the future and reduce their fees so that they can afford it.
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people
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students
don’
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t do not
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have to
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pay
any
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fee
for their learning.
However
, others consider the payment to be the responsibility of each
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student
. In my opinion, both qualities are of great significance in equal measure, and I will
further
elaborate in this essay.

To embark on, there are various reasons why tuition exemptions are essential. There are
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many
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students
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who
are
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disadvantaged and
they can’t can not afford all the expenses
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fees
at school.
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However
they
are qualified
to become a productive worker and contribute to the economy of the country. And tax increases increasing
are obliged
to recoup that such tuition, giving more
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students
the opportunity to complete college program, and this will put
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students
in
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good
stead and
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join
hands in order to
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reduce
the illiteracy build well-trained
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workforce


On the other hand
, paying their
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fee
autonomously
is significant in view of their study. Unless they
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pay
for that tuition, they won’t will not obtain
unevenly
the college and the vocational college. This action leads to them becoming a financial burden on the
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government
's budget.
Besides
, the college doesn’
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t does not
have
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enough
money to upgrade their infrastructure and
therefore
teaching quality is
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affected
too. From a legal perspective, tuition
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fee
plays an essential role in the university and
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students
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who
can afford it have an edge over
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students
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who
do not.
For instance
, a
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student
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who
can
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pay
tuition can equip himself with the necessary equipment to support
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his or her
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own
learning and without as
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many
obstacles as others.

From my perspective,
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students
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who
are less fortunate can loan money from the bank to
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pay
for their tuition, which is
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just
a temporary solution
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but
it
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helps
everyone build an egalitarian society and ensure that all
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students
can capture all the lessons
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balancedly
.

To capitulate, it is a privilege that we are in the modern world where the poor
still
have incentives and opportunities to win their
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own
scholarships.
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.
Instead
, colleges and universities should
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pay
attention to universities their
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studentst
and
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help
them to
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get
a vocation in the future and
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reduce
their
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fees
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so
that they can afford it.
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IELTS essay Should students pay for their tution fees

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
366 words
5.5
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