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Should students bring there own devices.

Should students bring there own devices. J3w5E
Should students bring there own devices. Lot of students use there own devices in the school but is this right? Should Sstudents bring there own devices? Students shouldn’t bring there own devices. A lot of technical problems arive. Teachers can’t teach. A another problem is that lot of people can not financ a device fort the school. Schools can provide devices for students, who can not finance a device. Devices had lot of advantages and dis advantages but i think students should not bring there own devices because of the many technical problems who restricts teaching.
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IELTS essay Should students bring there own devices.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
96 words
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