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Should schools lend textbooks to their students

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Some schools insist that students buy the textbooks instead of lending them books. First, Lending books can help a lot of parents and children save their money, second, it helps them find all of the books they need easily, since school is already lending them the books. On the other hand, if the school wouldn’t lend the students their textbooks, they will have to buy the textbooks on themselves, this actively demonstrates that they will need to have their own responsibility. Also, it would help the school save money for other educational things
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insist that students
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the textbooks
instead
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help
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parents and children save their money, second, it
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helps
them find
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all of the
books they need
easily
, since
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school
is already lending them the books.

On the other hand
, if the
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school
wouldn’t lend the students their textbooks, they will
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have to
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buy
the textbooks on themselves, this
actively
demonstrates that they will need to have their
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own
responsibility.
Also
, it would
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help
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save money for other educational things
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IELTS essay Should schools lend textbooks to their students

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  American English
3 paragraphs
92 words
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