Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

SHOULD PEOPLE HELP THE POOR?

SHOULD PEOPLE HELP THE POOR? m85J1
Viet Nam is a developing country and It is gradually developing to improve citizens’ living standards. The number of the rich in this country is also increasing, but this doesn’t mean that there are no poor people at all. In reality, there are a lot of poor people who even don’t have a small house and they have to face basic living problems difficultly. Should we help the poor or ignore them and enjoy our own life? People should help the poor for some reasons. Firstly, we are luckier in life than the poor and we should share these things with others. In reality, you are one of the most privileged people in life. You have fresh water, clean clothes, food, and all of the things necessary for living while the poor rarely have enough of these things. We have enough fiancé to help them meet these basic needs and have a better life. People do not have to pay a large of money to help them, we can give them the things we do not use anymore but still useful like clothes, utensils or buy food for them This may be a simple thing to us, but great happiness and gift to the poor. Therefore, people should share their luckiness with the poor. Secondly, people who help the poor will have spiritual benefits and a “happy ending”. It is a causal law, when people do meaningful things like help the poor they will feel happy and mentally comfortable. They recognize life is more beautiful and meaningful when people can help and love each other. If your heart is pure and you give others a better life, you have the most peaceful ending for your life. In short, helping the poor will make your life meaningful. Opponents say that when we help the poor, they will become dependable on us and do make effort to improve their life anymore. While it may be true, there are still a lot of the poor who feel thankful and satisfied with our help. They try to use the simple things or little money from our help to make their life better by using these things in a reasonable and saving way as well as use this money to start doing something that can help them get a long-term source of income. Therefore, it is still necessary for people to help the poor and show them how to use our help effectively. In conclusion, helping people is always necessary and people should do it whenever they can. Although it is just a small action, it has a great meaning to the poor as well as the people who help the poor can share their hearts with others and gain spiritual benefits. Let's join hands for a better life and bring good things to the poor!
Possible spelling mistake found.
Viet
Nam is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing country
and It is
gradually
developing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
citizens’ living standards. The number of the rich in this country is
also
increasing,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this doesn’t mean that there are no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
at all. In reality, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
even don’t have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
house and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face basic living problems
difficultly
. Should we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
them and enjoy our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
?
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reasons.

Firstly
, we are luckier in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
than the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
poor and
we should share these things with others. In reality, you are one of the most privileged
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. You have fresh water, clean clothes, food, and
Consider using "all the".
all of the
things necessary for living while the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
rarely have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
of these things. We have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
fiancé to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
these basic needs and have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay a large of money to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
them, we can give them the things we do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
anymore
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
still
useful like clothes, utensils or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
food for them This may be a simple thing to us,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
great happiness and gift to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
.
Therefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should share their luckiness with the poor.

Secondly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
will have spiritual benefits and a “happy ending”. It is a causal law, when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do meaningful things like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
they will feel happy and mentally comfortable. They recognize
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
is more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
and meaningful when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
. If your heart is pure and you give others a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
, you have the most peaceful ending for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. In short, helping the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
meaningful.

Opponents say that when we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
, they will become dependable on us and do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
effort to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
anymore. While it may be true, there are
still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
feel thankful and satisfied with our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
. They try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the simple things or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
money from our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
by using these things in a reasonable and saving way
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this money to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
doing something that can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a long-term source of income.
Therefore
, it is
still
necessary for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
them how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
effectively
.

In conclusion
, helping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
is always necessary and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should do it whenever they can. Although it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
action, it has a great meaning to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
as well
as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
can share their hearts with others and gain spiritual benefits.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
hands for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and bring
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
things to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
!
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay SHOULD PEOPLE HELP THE POOR?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
471 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts