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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working with a group of people is better option than working alone if we intend to do a project that require a lot of creativity.

Working with a group of people is better option than working alone if we intend to do a project that require a lot of creativity. b3OBB
Nowadays, an increasing number of company incline to assign a project to a group of people because it absorbs various ideas from many people. However, some people maintain that working alone is more efficient since there is no need for them to spend time gathering up and reaching an agreement. From my perspective, I support that working with a group of people comes out more benefits when dealing with a project that requires creativity. To begin with, working with a group of people can speed up efficiency since members can allocate the tasks, offering a variety of ideas. On the contrary, if you handle with a project alone, you have to solve every aspects of the project. As a result, you feel exhausted and can not submit the project on time. My own experience is a compelling example. In the company, our supervisor assigns a sweater design to a group of people, including me. In the project, we have to submit a creative draft to win clients’ favor. In this case, some people provides suitable and special materials for sweater to make it suitable and warm; some members offer a list of Chinese traditional elements in Tang dynasty for the design; other employees provide unique ideas about taking some figures in temples in Medieval times. Due to the various creative ideas from the group, we quickly combine each member’s idea, instead of spending much time to search for inspiration. Eventually, we submitted the art design within a week, meeting the demands of clients. However, if I work alone, I could not come up with creative ideas quickly. Instead, it may take me half a month. Thus, working with a group of people comes to be more efficient. Moreover, working with a group of people enables each member in the group to learn more. That is, when we listen to their different perspectives about the project, we can learn from them, expanding our horizon. My own experience can illustrate this point well. My supervisor gave our group a movie design about a political issue which required to be presented in a novel way. In the group, some people argues that we should utilize the technique called the Forth wall taken from theater design to interpret obscure issues to audiences; other people point out taking Macguffin strategy enables spectators to immerse in the movie completely. It seems that working with a group of people offers me an opportunity to learn more, enriching my understanding of patterns of manifestation in the movie. However, if I work alone, I could obtain such knowledge. In conclusion, working with a group of people is more efficient to finish the project which requires much creativity since an great number of people can provide their ideas, and it brings a chance for members to expand their horizon.
Nowadays, an increasing number of
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company
incline to assign a
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people
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because
it absorbs various
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ideas
from
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people
.
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,
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some
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people
maintain that
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working
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alone
is more efficient since there is no need for them to spend
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time
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gathering up
and reaching an agreement. From my perspective, I support that
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working
with a
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group
of
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people
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comes
out more benefits when dealing with a
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project
that requires creativity.

To
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with,
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working
with a
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group
of
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people
can
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speed up
efficiency since
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members
can allocate the tasks, offering a variety of
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ideas
.
On the contrary
, if you handle with a
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project
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alone
, you
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have to
solve every
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aspects
of the
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project
.
As a result
, you feel exhausted and can not submit the
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project
on
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time
. My
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own
experience is a compelling example. In the
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company
, our supervisor assigns a sweater
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design
to a
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group
of
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people
, including me. In the
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project
, we
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have to
submit a creative draft to win clients’ favor.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
this case,
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some
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people
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provides
suitable and special materials for sweater to
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make
it suitable and warm;
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some
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members
offer a list of Chinese traditional elements in Tang dynasty for the
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design
; other employees provide unique
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ideas
about taking
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some
figures in temples in Medieval
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times
. Due to the various creative
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ideas
from the
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group
, we
quickly
combine each
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member’s
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idea
,
instead
of spending much
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time
to search for inspiration.
Eventually
, we submitted the art
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design
within a week, meeting the demands of clients.
However
, if I work
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alone
, I could not
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come
up with creative
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ideas
quickly
.
Instead
, it may take me half a month.
Thus
,
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working
with a
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group
of
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people
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comes
to be more efficient.

Moreover
,
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working
with a
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group
of
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people
enables each
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member
in the
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group
to learn more.
That is
, when we listen to their
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different
The usual preposition for "perspectives" is "on" not "about." Revise: "perspectives on".
perspectives about
the
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project
, we can learn from them, expanding our horizon. My
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own
experience can illustrate this point well. My supervisor gave our
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group
a movie
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design
about a political issue which required to
be presented
Consider replacing "in a novel way" with the adverb for "novel"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a novel way
. In the
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group
,
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some
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people
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argues
that we should utilize the technique called the Forth wall taken from theater
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design
to interpret obscure issues to audiences; other
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people
point out taking
Possible spelling mistake found.
Macguffin
strategy enables spectators to immerse in the movie completely. It seems that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
of
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people
offers me an opportunity to learn more, enriching my understanding of patterns of manifestation in the movie.
However
, if I work
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alone
, I could obtain such knowledge.

In conclusion
,
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working
with a
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group
of
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people
is more efficient to finish the
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project
which requires much creativity since
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
great number of
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people
can provide their
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ideas
, and it brings a chance for
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members
to expand their horizon.
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IELTS essay Working with a group of people is better option than working alone if we intend to do a project that require a lot of creativity.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
469 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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