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email about booking room at my hotel

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I am writing to confirm your booking at my hotel. We’re checking an available room for 2 people in 3 nights on December 24th, 2021. We will prepare you special dishes as soon as you arrive at our hotel, speciaficially, Spaghetti Bologneses, Lotus delight salad, apple pie, juice, . . . We have a few suggestions for you on a tour around the city on the morning of the 25th. You will travel by bus; it only takes nearly 2 hours for you to see the whole city. We think it will make you love and understand this city more. And the price for 3 nights at our hotel is $250 and it’s better that you pay us $180 upfront to keep your room for you. If you have any questions about our hotel service please contact us immediately, we will answer for you. Thank you for booking our hotel.
I am writing to confirm your booking at my
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hotel
. We’re checking an available room for 2
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people
in 3 nights on December 24th, 2021. We will prepare you special dishes as
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as you arrive at our
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speciaficially
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Bologneses
, Lotus delight salad, apple pie, juice
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have a few suggestions for you on a tour around the city on the morning of the 25th. You will travel by bus; it
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only
takes
nearly
2 hours for you to
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see
the whole city. We
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think
it will
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make
you
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love
and understand this city more.

And the price for 3 nights at our
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hotel
is $250 and it’s better that you pay us $180 upfront to
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keep
your room for you. If you have any questions about our
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hotel
service
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please
contact us immediately, we will answer for you. Thank you for booking our
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hotel
.

IELTS essay email about booking room at my hotel

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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