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email about booking room at my hotel

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I am writing to confirm your booking at my hotel. We’re checking an available room for 2 people in 3 nights on December 24th, 2021. We will prepare you special dishes as soon as you arrive at our hotel, speciaficially, Spaghetti Bologneses, Lotus delight salad, apple pie, juice, . . . We have a few suggestions for you on a tour around the city on the morning of the 25th. You will travel by bus; it only takes nearly 2 hours for you to see the whole city. We think it will make you love and understand this city more. And the price for 3 nights at our hotel is $250 and it’s better that you pay us $180 upfront to keep your room for you. If you have any questions about our hotel service please contact us immediately, we will answer for you. Thank you for booking our hotel.

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 the whole city. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 and understand this city more.

And the price for 3 nights at our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 is $250 and it’s better that you pay us $180 upfront to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 your room for you. If you have any questions about our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
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please
 contact us immediately, we will answer for you. Thank you for booking our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
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