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SHOULD PARENTS SPEND MORE TIME HELPING THEIR CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOME WORK.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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SHOULD GUARDIANS SPEND TIME IN EXCESS AIDING THEIR WARDS WITH THEIR PROJECT WORK I AGREE WITH THIS VIEW POINT AND I WILL GIVE MY REASONS AND EXAMPLES IN THE ESSAY BELOW ONE COMPELLING REASON FOR HOLDING ON TO THIS VIEW IS, PARENTS WILL KNOW IF THEIR WARDS ARE PERFORMING ACADEMICALLY WELL IN SCHOOL. FOR EXAMPLE, THE CHILD IS CAPABLE OF ANSWERING MOST QUESTIONS ON HIS OWN RATHER THAN THE PARENTS ASSISTANCE. ANOTHER REASON IS IT CREATS BOND BETWEEN THEM. WHILE GUARDIANS AID THEIR JUVINILES IN DOING THEIR HOME WORK, IT EASES ANY TENSION THAT HANGS IN THE AIR. HENCE CHILDREN ARE ABLE TO ASK ANY QUESTION BOTHERING THEM, AND IN ADDITION, OPENS UP CONVERSATION, PARENTS GET TO KNOW WHAT GOES ON IN SCHOOL, FOR EXAMPLE, IF THEY ARE BEING BULLIED OR IF THEIR WARDS ARE BULLIES AND THE TYPE OF FRIENDS THEY ASSOCIATE THEMSELVES WITH. LASTLY, CLEAR UNDERSTANDING OF A TOPIC. EVEN THOUGH LITTLE ONES MAY COMPREHEND MOST OF THE SUBJECTS TAUGHT IN CLASS BY THEIR EDUCATION TEACHERS, THEY ARE LIKELY TO HAVE A CLEARER EXPLANATION FROM MOM OR DAD. IN CONCLUSION, GUARDIANS SHOULD SPEND A LOT OF TIME AIDING THEIR YOUNGER ONES WITH THEIR HOME WORK. I AGREE TO THIS VIEW OWING TO THE FACT THAT, IT HELPS PARENTS TO KNOW IF THEIR CHILDREN ARE PERFORMING ACADEMICALLY WELL IN THEIR EDUCATION, FURTHERMORE ITS CREATS BOND BETWEEN PARENT AND CHILD AND IN ADDITION THERE IS BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF A SUBJECT
SHOULD GUARDIANS SPEND TIME IN EXCESS AIDING THEIR WARDS WITH THEIR PROJECT WORK I
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AGREE
WITH THIS VIEW POINT AND I WILL GIVE MY REASONS AND EXAMPLES IN THE ESSAY BELOW

ONE COMPELLING REASON FOR HOLDING ON TO THIS VIEW IS,
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PARENTS
WILL KNOW IF THEIR WARDS ARE PERFORMING
ACADEMICALLY
WELL IN SCHOOL.
FOR EXAMPLE
, THE CHILD IS CAPABLE OF ANSWERING MOST QUESTIONS ON HIS
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OWN
RATHER
THAN THE
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ASSISTANCE.

ANOTHER REASON IS IT
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BOND BETWEEN THEM. WHILE GUARDIANS AID THEIR
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IN DOING THEIR HOME WORK, IT
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EASES
ANY TENSION THAT HANGS IN THE AIR.
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HENCE
CHILDREN ARE ABLE TO ASK ANY QUESTION BOTHERING THEM, AND
IN ADDITION
, OPENS UP CONVERSATION,
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PARENTS
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TO KNOW WHAT GOES ON IN SCHOOL,
FOR EXAMPLE
, IF THEY ARE
BEING BULLIED
OR IF THEIR WARDS ARE BULLIES AND THE TYPE OF FRIENDS THEY ASSOCIATE THEMSELVES WITH.

LASTLY
,
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EVEN THOUGH
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MAY COMPREHEND MOST OF THE SUBJECTS TAUGHT IN
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BY THEIR EDUCATION TEACHERS, THEY ARE LIKELY TO HAVE A CLEARER EXPLANATION FROM MOM OR DAD.

IN CONCLUSION
, GUARDIANS SHOULD SPEND
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TIME AIDING THEIR YOUNGER
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ONES
WITH THEIR HOME WORK. I
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TO THIS VIEW OWING TO THE FACT THAT, IT
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PARENTS
TO KNOW IF THEIR CHILDREN ARE PERFORMING
ACADEMICALLY
WELL IN THEIR EDUCATION,
FURTHERMORE
ITS
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CREATS
BOND BETWEEN
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PARENT
AND CHILD AND
IN ADDITION
THERE IS BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF A
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SUBJECT

IELTS essay SHOULD PARENTS SPEND MORE TIME HELPING THEIR CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOME WORK.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
239 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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