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Should healthcare be free?

Should healthcare be free? kLn3R
It is undeniable that healthcare system plays an important role in one's health but there are mixed reviews on whether healthcare should be free or paid. Firstly, free healthcare brings several benefits, such as saving lives and boosting the nation's economy. Modern society is towards equality for all, especially in medical and education; therefore, free healthcare is essential to provide medical treatment opportunities for both rich and poor people. As a result, free healthcare contributes to faster disease detection and treatment by encouraging people to go to the doctor more frequently. For instance, free medical services contribute to reducing diseases in slums inhabited by poor people by providing them with chances to access health services without paying. In addition free healthcare creates healthier workforce, boosting the nations' economy. Free healthcare allows all citizens to access to health treatment, ensuring their health at workplace. As a result, free healthcare increases their productivity and work efficiency, which affects positively the nation's economy. On the contrary, free medical healthcare also has some disadvantages, such as degrading the quality of services and corroding the nation's budget. Since free healthcare provides medical examinations for everyone, hospitals will be overloaded with work because of the large number of people coming to the clinic. Therefore, service quality is reduced, leading to misdiagnosis for patients. Besides, free medical services also corrode the nation's economy. The fact that most country's budget goes to free healthcare affects other industries. For example, 40% of Canada's budget goes to health services, which cut off the budget from other government services like education.
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important
role in one's
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health
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but
there
are mixed
reviews on whether healthcare should be
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free
or paid.

Firstly
,
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free
healthcare brings several benefits, such as saving
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lives
and boosting the
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nation's
economy. Modern society is towards equality for all,
especially
in
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medical
and education;
therefore
,
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free
healthcare is essential to provide
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medical
treatment opportunities for both rich and poor
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people
.
As a result
,
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free
healthcare contributes to faster disease detection and treatment by encouraging
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people
to go to the doctor more
frequently
.
For instance
,
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free
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medical
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services
contribute to reducing diseases in slums inhabited by poor
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people
by providing them with chances to access
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health
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services
without paying. In
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addition
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free
healthcare creates healthier workforce, boosting the nations' economy.
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healthcare
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allows
all citizens to access to
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health
treatment, ensuring their
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health
at workplace.
As a result
,
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free
healthcare increases their productivity and work efficiency, which affects
positively
the
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nation's
economy.

On the contrary
,
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free
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medical
healthcare
also
has
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some
disadvantages, such as degrading the quality of
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services
and corroding the
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nation's
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budget
. Since
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free
healthcare provides
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medical
examinations for everyone, hospitals will
be overloaded
with work
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because
of the large number of
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people
coming to the clinic.
Therefore
,
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service
quality is
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reduced
, leading to misdiagnosis for patients.
Besides
,
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free
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medical
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services
also
corrode the
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nation's
economy. The fact that most country's
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budget
goes to
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free
healthcare affects other industries.
For example
, 40% of Canada's
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budget
goes to
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health
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services
, which
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cut
off the
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budget
from other
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government
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services
like education.
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IELTS essay Should healthcare be free?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
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