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History awakes your thougts to a new level. One must know historical events and its important lessons to be adopted in day to day life too. Highly advanced economy has put the History aside in many forms. My views inclined toward importance of History though it has left little value in today's era. To begin with, History is always path directing, removing your doubts and helping to reduce your depression level. Life gives lot of unpredicted situations but still reading of The Geeta Shlokas gives you inner strength and satisfaction. For instance, Mahatma Gandhiji used to read The Geeta whenever he was in dilema in taking decision. There is no doubt that in this technological advanced economies, past techniques of working and communication are not useful. But many fradulent activities are done and at last you need to calm down with yoga and other ancient techniques suggested by dhamgurus and some times Chanakya niti is also useful to tackle people with the smartness.
History
awakes your
thougts
to a new level. One
must
know historical
events
and its
important
lessons to
be adopted
in day to day life too.
Highly
advanced economy has put the
History
aside in
many
forms. My views inclined toward importance of
History
though it has
left
little
value in
today
's era.

To
begin
with,
History
is always path directing, removing your doubts and helping to
reduce
your depression level. Life gives
lot of
unpredicted
situations
but
still
reading of The
Geeta
Shlokas
gives you inner strength and satisfaction.
For instance
, Mahatma
Gandhiji
used
to read The
Geeta
whenever he was in
dilema
in taking decision.

There is no doubt that in this technological advanced economies, past techniques of working and communication are not useful.
But
many
fradulent
activities
are done
and at last you need to calm down with yoga and other ancient techniques suggested by
dhamgurus
and
some
times
Chanakya
niti
is
also
useful to tackle
people
with the smartness.
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IELTS essay history has a little value

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
163 words
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