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Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyles?

Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyles? m9jXK

Some people are of the view that govt should not interfere in people's lifestyle choices but some consider the opposite. However, there should be a balance of people's own choices and decisions imposed by govt. For example, everyone should have the right to lead their life in their own way whether they want to study, party or indulge in bad habit. However, if people, do not take responsibility of their actions, then it can result in surge of crimes like rapes, murders, alcoholism and drunk driving. To regulate such scenarios, govt decisions comes to rescue. Govt can regulate these things by imposing strict laws on crimes and prohibiting drugs usage and encourage people to adopt healthy lifesytles to lead a long live so that the future generations can learn something from this. To conclude, people should start behaving responsibly and govt should only impose minimal interference in people's lifestyles.

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