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It is taught by a number of people that university education should be free for all students.

It is taught by a number of people that university education should be free for all students. JLnLD
It is taught by a number of people that university education should be free for all students. I fully agree with this statement and I will try to state my position. It is no doubt, university education is vital for every one of us, it creates out future profession and helps us improve working skills. There are people who cannot afford university education because it is too expensive. I have always wanted to be a doctor and study at a good private university but my family cannot afford it. That is why I support this statement. This decision will give people, whether they are rich or poor, equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering university because they are unable to pay the fees. In conclusion, I would like to note that free university education is important for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance.
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by a number of
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people
that
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university
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education
should be free for all students. I
fully
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agree
with this statement and I will try to state my position.

It is no doubt,
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university
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education
is vital for every one of us, it creates out future profession and
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helps
us
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improve
working
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skills
. There are
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people
who cannot afford
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university
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education
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because
it is too expensive. I have always wanted to be a doctor and study at a
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good
private
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university
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but
my family cannot afford it.
That is
why I support this statement.

This decision will give
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people
, whether they are rich or poor, equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are
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prevented
from entering
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university
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because
they are unable to pay the fees.

In conclusion
, I would like to note that free
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university
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education
is
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important
for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance.

IELTS essay It is taught by a number of people that university education should be free for all students.

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4 paragraphs
155 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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