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Should government focus on science faculty students or they should also focus on regular feculty student like arts and commerce

Should government focus on science faculty students or they should also focus on regular feculty student like arts and commerce BaKNd
Students are the future of nation and they have the ability to make their nation to reach on top leval in each and every field. Therefore, it is very important for government to keep balance in support for science faculty as well as regular faculties such as arts and commerce as both hold equal values in devloping the nations. To start with, in this 21 century there can be no place where science did not gave its contribution. Man can stand nowhere in today's ara without science so it is very importanat for government to support science faculty studnets by providing scholarship or by giving them information about the future and importance of science. science field studnets can work in industry, medicals, construction, reaserch and many more fields which are essential for any nations growth. For instance, scientist can work for defanse system for country security. However, one can not denied the fact that regular faculties studnets hold equal contribution in devloping of nataions as regular faculties students have power to represent their nation by their arts such as singer, painter, dancer, politicians and main important is leaders. Artist and expert can have power to make their nation proud by their own achivements. For example, any sportsperson who won medals at olympic can make their nation mark in global leval. To conclude, Government can not be biased as both faculty studnets have their own different value which can not be compared and have same potential and importanc
Students are the future of
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nation
to reach on top
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in each and every field.
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important
for
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government
to
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keep
balance in support for
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science
faculty
as well
as regular faculties such as arts and commerce as both hold equal values in
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devloping
the nations.

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there can be no place where
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did not
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its contribution.
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without
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science
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very
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importanat
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to support
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science
faculty
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studnets
by providing scholarship or by giving them information about the future and importance of
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science
.
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science
field
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studnets
can work in industry, medicals, construction,
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reaserch
and
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more fields which are essential for any
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nations
growth.
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defanse
system for country security.

However
, one can not
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denied
the fact that regular faculties
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studnets
hold equal contribution in
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devloping
of
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nataions
as regular faculties students have power to represent their
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nation
by their arts such as singer, painter, dancer, politicians and main
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important
is leaders. Artist and expert can have power to
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their
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nation
proud by their
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achivements
.
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, any sportsperson who won medals at
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olympic
can
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their
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mark in global
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leval
.

To conclude
,
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can not
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studnets
have their
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value which can not
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IELTS essay Should government focus on science faculty students or they should also focus on regular feculty student like arts and commerce

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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