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"Should Government be responsible for providing pure drinking water to all or should the people obtain their own water?"

"Should Government be responsible for providing pure drinking water to all or should the people obtain their own water? " 85dpr
Water is life. Purity of it may sustain and impurity may perish all. In that all consuming concept, it is necessary, and, it is commonly said that all necessities should be provided by the government. While such popular opinion is ideally justifiable, I believe that, with the exception of those of desert and disaster areas, governments should not be burdened with the duty of providing drinking water, as it can very easily be done by individuals in most areas. Speaking generally, modern society has progressed far enough not to consider thirst as a threat. We get bottled water delivered to our doors in many places. And tap water is clean enough to just boil at home and drink. Small servings of drinking water are also cheaply bought at convenience stores almost anywhere. In terms of Bangladesh, for example, water is one of the cheapest of all home utilities. So, now, water is no problem! There are of course those areas where all provisions for sustenance are scarce, may be due to war or other disasters, natural or not. Those cases must be held as exceptions, which they really are, and call for government sponsored supply of all general means for living, e. g. food, shelter, education, clothing, pure drinking water, even portable air conditioners, like often are supplied in USA and some wealthy middle eastern countries. So as said, there are exceptionalities, and they should not be used to argue against rationale, that is, distributing drinking water in times of peace is too trivial a matter for the government, or a bureau of it, to be occupied with. We can, therefore, conclude that drinking water, in the contemporary perspective, is available enough to be left as responsibility on the shoulder of the governed, not the government, except the situations that go beyond all generalities.
Water
is life. Purity of it may sustain and impurity may perish all. In that all consuming concept, it is necessary, and, it is
commonly
said that all necessities should
be provided
by the
government
. While such popular opinion is
ideally
justifiable, I believe that,
with the exception of
those of desert and disaster areas,
governments
should not
be burdened
with the duty of providing
drinking
water
, as it can
very
easily
be done
by individuals in most areas.

Speaking
generally
, modern society has progressed far
enough
not to consider thirst as a threat. We
get
bottled
water
delivered to our doors in
many
places. And tap
water
is clean
enough
to
just
boil at home and drink.
Small
servings of
drinking
water
are
also
cheaply
bought
at convenience stores almost anywhere. In terms of Bangladesh,
for example
,
water
is one of the cheapest of all home utilities.
So
,
now
,
water
is no problem!

There are
of course
those areas where all provisions for sustenance are scarce, may be due to war or other disasters, natural or not. Those cases
must
be held
as exceptions, which they
really
are, and call for
government
sponsored supply of all general means for living,
e. g.
food, shelter, education, clothing, pure
drinking
water
, even portable air conditioners, like
often
are supplied
in USA
and
some
wealthy middle eastern countries.
So
as said, there are
exceptionalities
, and they should not be
used
to argue against rationale,
that is
, distributing
drinking
water
in times of peace is too trivial a matter for the
government
, or a bureau of it, to
be occupied
with.

We can,
therefore
, conclude that
drinking
water
,
in the contemporary perspective
, is available
enough
to be
left
as responsibility on the shoulder of the governed, not the
government
, except the situations that go beyond all generalities.
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IELTS essay "Should Government be responsible for providing pure drinking water to all or should the people obtain their own water? "

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
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