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should be allowed to choose their shit in every session for two

In my view students should be allowed to choose their seat in every session for two specific reasons. First, group study, to be more specific, in some days students need to study in a group and different groups for different classes. They should have chance to modify the scopes. Second, different moods, for example, sometimes maybe students be sleepy or do not ready for class and they want to be in the back of class or someday they will be ready and they want to be in front of class to answer the teachers' questions. And that's why I believe the students should have options to choose their seats in every session.
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to choose their seat in every session for two specific reasons.
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need to study in a group and
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. They should have chance to modify the scopes. Second,
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moods,
for example
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students
be sleepy or do not ready for
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class and
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or someday they will be
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ready and
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to answer the teachers' questions. And that's why I believe the
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should have options to choose their seats in every session.

IELTS essay should be allowed to choose their shit in every session for two

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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