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Developed countries have creamany environmental problems in the world particularly in their contribution to global warming what can be done to reduce the danger of global warming?

Every developed country produces some environmental problems, and one of this global warming. All the government in developing nations should take responsibility to reduce the problem that damage global warming. Firstly the cause of global warming is increasing the number of transportation, which cause air pollution. The citizen should not use /buy their cars to avoid more coming of vehicles and also to save fuel and emission of carbon dioxide. Too much transportation will not help to reduce air pollution and it will increase the damage of global warming. People did not use their vehicles if it is unnecessary. They should encourage to use public transportation, so the traffic will also avoid. Another cause of the high risk of global warming is deforestation or illegal logging. Every tree is important to the nation. It helps to absorb the water and help the animals to become their home. Several people don't know how essential trees. They cut all the trees and make some money. But they did not know that trees will help to reduce global warming. The authorities should make rules and regulations about cutting trees. And they should encourage every citizen to plant more trees and not to cut them. In conclusion, developing countries are not bad, on the contrary, they should know the limitations and be aware of global warming. The nations will inform global warming, they can watch television, listening to the radio, so they will have an idea of what is happening to the world or global warming.
Every
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developed country
produces
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some
environmental problems, and one of this
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global
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warming
. All the
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government
in developing nations should take responsibility to
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reduce
the problem that damage
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global
warming.

Firstly
the cause of
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global
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warming
is increasing the number of transportation, which cause air pollution. The citizen should not
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use
/
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buy
their cars to avoid more coming of vehicles and
also
to save fuel and emission of carbon dioxide. Too much transportation will not
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help
to
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reduce
air
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pollution and
it will increase the
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damage of
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global
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warming
.
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People
did not
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use
their vehicles if it is unnecessary. They should encourage to
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use
public transportation,
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so
the traffic will
also
avoid.

Another cause of the high
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risk
of
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global
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warming
is deforestation or illegal logging. Every
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tree
is
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important
to the nation. It
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helps
to absorb the water and
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help
the animals to become their home. Several
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people
don't know how essential
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trees
. They
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cut
all the
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trees
and
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make
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some
money.
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But
they did not know that
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trees
will
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help
to
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reduce
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global
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warming
. The authorities should
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make
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rules
and regulations about cutting
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trees
. And they should encourage every citizen to plant more
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trees
and not to
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cut
them.

In conclusion
,
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developing countries
are not
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bad
,
on the contrary
, they should know the limitations and be aware of
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global
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warming
. The nations will inform
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global
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warming
, they can
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watch
television, listening to the radio,
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so
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they


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will
have an
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idea
of what is happening to the world or
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global
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warming
.
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IELTS essay Developed countries have creamany environmental problems in the world particularly in their contribution to global warming what can be done to reduce the danger of global warming?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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