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Shortage of housing has given several social consequences, only government who can solve the problem.

Shortage of housing has given several social consequences, only government who can solve the problem. 2bRdx
All populated areas are facing living problems for many years, which was only controlled by their states. One of the biggest issues is lack of residential area which is only possible solution by the authority. I partially agree with statement because there is responsibilities of both state as well as nation to overcome on public trouble. There is a critical public problem of living place due to unable to make enough of new housing societies. The basic issue of the limitation of housing rises the matter of cramping space where people have bound to live in. In Asian countries, especially in Singapore and India, people are living in a bad condition because of lack of housing. People and authority have come to overcome the affair by making more building or institute should build new houses. Over 5 years later, in June 2018, I have seen the obstacle of living have been decreased. Mostly a big topic have been covered by the people and power. One of the social affair of shortage of housing is migrating. Dispute cannot be solved by the folks, so that rule can interfere to solve complication. In the newspaper, the Daily Dawn, has recently published a report about African countries in Egypt 2010, most of the people who were from the Al - jazzier, they were facing of living spaces so that public and ministry solved their matter by not entering outside people in the border. To counter measure not only regime but publicly is responsible to remediate the question. In conclusion, there is a lot of question behind the scarcity of habitation which it is told by the people that only Bureaucrat can eradicate the difficulty. I moderately agree with statement because there is need to share service on affair by both nation and authority.
All populated areas are facing
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living
problems for
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many
years, which was
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only
controlled by their states. One of the biggest issues is lack of residential area which is
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only
possible solution by the authority. I
partially
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agree
with statement
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because
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there is responsibilities
of both state
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as well as
nation to overcome on public trouble.

There is a critical public problem of
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living
place due
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to unable
to
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make
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enough
of new housing societies. The basic issue of the limitation of housing rises the matter of cramping space where
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people
have bound to
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live
in. In Asian countries,
especially
in Singapore and India,
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people
are
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living
in a
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bad
condition
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because
of lack of housing.
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People
and authority have
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come
to overcome the affair by making more building or institute should build new
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houses
. Over 5 years later, in June 2018, I have
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seen
the obstacle of
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living
have
been decreased
.
Mostly
a
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big
topic have
been covered
by the
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people
and power.

One of the social affair of shortage of housing is migrating. Dispute cannot
be solved
by the folks,
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so
that
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rule
can interfere to solve complication. In the newspaper, the Daily Dawn, has recently published a report about African countries in Egypt 2010, most of the
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people
who were from the Al
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-
jazzier, they were facing of
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living
spaces
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so
that public and ministry solved their matter by not entering outside
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people
in the border. To counter measure not
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only
regime
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but
publicly
is responsible to remediate the question.

In conclusion
, there is
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a lot of
question behind the scarcity of habitation which it is
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told
by the
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people
that
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only


Bureaucrat can eradicate the difficulty. I
moderately
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agree
with statement
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because
there
is need
to share service on affair by both nation and authority.
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IELTS essay Shortage of housing has given several social consequences, only government who can solve the problem.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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