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SHIPWRECK ISLAND SURVIVORS

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Despite the mad chaos of the sinking, exploding ship, Lim was still able to grab a life jacket, which was vital, as he had never learnt to swim well. He floated in the ocean for what he estimated to be around two hours until he spotted one of the ship’s life rafts. It was a wooden raft about two and a half meters square, partially covered by a canvas roof. He used the canvas from the roof and his life jacket to make a container to catch rainwater. By day 60, he was aware that he was losing physical strength so he began to swim around the life raft twice a day. This routine continued until a particularly bad storm nearly destroyed his life raft. Lim went on to live to the age of 72, and even now, 133 days remains the longest time for one person to survive being lost at sea in a life raft.

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 a container to catch rainwater.

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so
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raft
 twice a day. This routine continued until a particularly
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bad
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 went on to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
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 to the age of 72, and even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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, 133 days remains the longest time for one person to survive being lost
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