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How tomato ketchup is made

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the pictures illustrate the process how to made tomato sauce there are several steps in the production to made tomato ketchup. The product have to: harvesting, cooking, bottled it then shipping delivery crush At the biginning of the process, when all the tomatoes are rip. The worker will go there to harvested it and the they choose, sort good and bad tomatoes. After that, the tomatoes are transported by a truck. The following stage is was by high pressurised water and remove the stalk, seeds and skin. The next step is put them ín the container then into liquid. That tomatoes liquid is optained by crushing tomatoes. The sauce have mixed with somed seasoning like: sugar, vinegar and salt. Subsequent step, we need to be heated or boiling it. The last step, ketchup will be cooled in twos house. Another steps for making ketchup that the workers will put ketchup in bottles. In the next, they have to labelling and then testing the quality of manufactured products. All of tomatoes sauce will be packaged by bulk. Finally, the product ưill delivered and sold to market or restaurent. You can eat with many food good.

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 pictures illustrate the process how to made tomato sauce

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steps
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ketchup
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have to
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biginning
 of the process, when all the tomatoes are rip. The worker will go there to harvested it and Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "they"?thethey
the they
 choose, sort This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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 by a truck. The following stage Did you mean "is", "was", or "it was"?iswasit was
is was
 by high Possible spelling mistake. 'pressurised' is British English.pressurized
pressurised
 water and remove the stalk, seeds and skin. The next
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step
is put
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ín
 the container then into liquid. That tomatoes liquid is Possible spelling mistake found.obtained
optained
 by crushing tomatoes. The sauce have mixed with Possible spelling mistake found.somedomedsowedsoledhomedSMED
somed
 seasoning like: sugar, vinegar and salt. Subsequent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, we need to be heated
 or boiling it. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 will be cooled
 in twos This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

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steps
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ketchup
 that the workers will put You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 in bottles. In the next
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 labelling and then testing the quality of manufactured products. Consider using "All tomatoes" or "All of the tomatoes".All tomatoesAll of the tomatoes
All of tomatoes
 sauce will be packaged
 by bulk. Finally
, the product Possible spelling mistake found.willbillhillkillfillmill
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 delivered and sold to market or Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restaurent
. You can eat with Use "much" or "little" with uncountable nouns.muchlittle
many
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good
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