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Shcool uniforms should be abolished.Do you agree or disagree?

Shcool uniforms should be abolished. 70a23
Eliminate school uniforms in all schools is controversial topic while there are some people who believe that socio-economic and moral affect school uniforms should discus s in governmental assemble. Firstly buying school uniforms is affect on people are in socio-economic a cross section of status. therefore it is not important in lesson process for them to utilize uniform who is going to school. Furthermore children can be more individual and creative about clothes choice in the next ages. On the other hand it is prevent loss a time during preparation, thus, in addition school uniforms make productive learned lesson because children can focus on not new clothes just to the education process. Furthermore uniforms are decreasing spending money for variety clothes. As well as it reduce inequality feeling of jealous And it considered that school uniforms are support for status in low-income family’s. I feel that all options which written above has negative and positive side. The school uniforms are useful and it has been better if make suitable condition’s for people are in low-income status. However that is prefer if every school should has several uniforms because it will avoid from monotony and children could feel difference of life colors and as well as they can concentrate on their lesson. Overall in this remedies all people will reach a conclusion.
Eliminate
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in all
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is controversial topic while there are
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socio-economic
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school
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s in governmental assemble.

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buying
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uniforms
is
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affect
on
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people
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socio-economic
a cross section of status.
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it is not
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important
in lesson process for them to utilize
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uniform
who is going to
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school
.
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Furthermore
children can be more individual and creative about clothes choice in the
next
ages.

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it is
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prevent
loss a time during preparation,
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school
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uniforms
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make
productive learned lesson
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because
children can focus on not new clothes
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to the education process.
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are decreasing spending money for variety clothes.
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as it
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reduce
inequality feeling of jealous And it considered that
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are support for status in low-income family’s.

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negative
and
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side. The
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school
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uniforms
are useful and it has been better if
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make
suitable condition’s for
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people
are in low-income status.
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However
that is
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should
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several
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uniforms
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because
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as well
as they can concentrate on their lesson.
Overall
in
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people
will reach a conclusion.
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IELTS essay Shcool uniforms should be abolished.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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