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What do you think the most common crime in your country is?

What do you think the most common crime in your country is? Eq3WM
From what I observe, the common crime in Vietnam is probably fraud, theft and pickpocketing. Because these crimes are committed on a small scale or personally, the frequency of theft or fraud is quite high. There are also many other types of crimes happening in my country such as drug dealing, prostitution, But the rates of these types of crimes are gradually decreasing so it's probably nothing to worry about.
From what I observe, the common
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in Vietnam is
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fraud, theft and
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pickpocketing
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crimes
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small
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, the frequency of theft or fraud is quite high. There are
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happening in my country such as drug dealing, prostitution,
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IELTS essay What do you think the most common crime in your country is?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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