Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

sharing an inspirational story that leaves a deep impression on you.

sharing an inspirational story that leaves a deep impression on you. 85do5

Today I am happy to share my stories about the person who inspired me in my study and in my life. That is my cousin,his name’s Minh. He once told me, "Success will come to people when they really try and train, even if they don't have the talents. It is you who create success for you. , no matter how many difficulties there are many ways to solve them. Don't be discouraged, don't give up because behind you always have family to support you ". My brother is now a manager. In the past, he had failed his university entrance exam 3 times, but he never gave up, he spent the whole time studying and working as a waiter to pay for his tuition. Thanks to the hard work and effort, he passed the Foreign Trade University with a high score. After graduating, he applied for a job in a foreign company, from a normal employee two years ago, now he is a manager of the company. He really gave me lots of motivation and inspiration to study. In difficult times, I always look to him for advice. He made me realize that what I'm doing really makes sense.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I am happy to share my stories about the person who inspired me in my studyPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
and in myPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
life. That is
 my cousinPut a space after the comma, his
,his
 name’s Possible spelling mistake found.MindMineMiniMinMintMing
Minh
. He once This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me, Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
Success will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 when they really
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
 train, even if they don't have the talents. It is you who create success for you. Loose punctuation mark.apply
,
 no matter how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 difficulties there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways to solve them. Don't be discouraged
, don't give up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 behind you always have family to support you Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
. My brother is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a manager. In the past, he had failed his university entrance exam 3 times, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he never gave up, he spent the whole time studying and working as a waiter to pay for his tuition. Thanks to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and effort, he passed the Foreign Trade University with a high score. After graduating, he applied for a job in a foreign This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, from a normal employee two years ago, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he is a manager of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. He really
 gave me lots of motivation and inspiration to study. In difficult times, I always look to him for advice. He made me realize that what I'm doing really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 sense.