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Shakespeare most likely wrote these lines in 1599. Do his seven ages still apply to people today? If so, what does this show us about humanity?

Shakespeare most likely wrote these lines in 1599. Do his seven ages still apply to people today? If so, what does this show us about humanity? nXpbo
Nowadays, these seven roles are still fitted in people in my opinion. On the other hand, human race hasn't changed too much through five centuries. In this period of time, lots of things such as education, economy, public health, etc have developed to a higher level by rapidly successful technology growth. However, recently, human are having some different stages in their life just like Shakespeare's thought. Therefore, this shows that although time has been passing but human personalities are still there and it will not dissapear. We all grow up as a kid, all find a lovely partner and all leave the world at the end.
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people
in my opinion.
On the other hand
, human race hasn't
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changed
too much through five centuries. In this period of time, lots of things such as education, economy, public health, etc have developed to a higher level by
rapidly
successful technology growth.
However
, recently, human are having
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some
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different
stages in their life
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like Shakespeare's
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thought
.
Therefore
, this
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shows
that although time has been passing
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human personalities are
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there and it will not
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dissapear
. We all grow up as a kid, all find a lovely partner and all
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leave
the world at the
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end
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IELTS essay Shakespeare most likely wrote these lines in 1599. Do his seven ages still apply to people today? If so, what does this show us about humanity?

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