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Pretend you are a researcher, studying King Tut’s death. What do you think happened to King Tut? How did he die? Write 4 sentences explaining your answer.

Pretend you are a researcher, studying King Tut’s death. What do you think happened to King Tut? How did he die? Write 4 sentences explaining your answer. MrRmo

A thousand years ago, there was a king name Tutankhanmun, he died in 1322 BC and the reason about why he died is still a mystery. I have a hypothesis about why he died when he just nineteen. I think because he was murdered by someone who hate him and want to be a king. I think this is what happened and why he died, first when the king is distraction the murdered attack him, he tried to resist but unfortunately fell and hit his body to the floor, that is the reason explain why some bones are missing. At the end, he can not defeat the murdered and. . dead.

A thousand years ago, there was a king name Possible spelling mistake found.Tutankhamen
Tutankhanmun
, he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 in 1322 BC and the reason about why he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 is still
 a mystery. I have a hypothesis about why he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 when he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 nineteen. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he was murdered
 by someone who hate him and want to be a king. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this is what happened and why he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
, first
 when the king is distraction the murdered attack him, he tried to resist This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately fell and hit his body to the floor, that is
 the reason This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 bones are missing. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, he can not defeat the murdered and. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDead
dead
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