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Modifications of the school vicinity

Modifications of the school vicinity kW75N

The picture illustrates the modifications in the construction that took place over the past 25 years. The major change that happened was with the houses near by the secondary school and later with the farmland and the sports field. School, mainroad and the Playground had no movement and they were kept intact. In 1950, the secondary school vicinity had houses, agricultural area and a ground for the kids to play. Almost all the four components occupied the similar land proportions. But there was an upgrade in 1980 and its quite evident that the science has taken a boom and a science block and car parking relaced houses and the farmland. Farmland had turned into sports field where as the houses were wiped off completely and car parking and science block were established. After 12 years further utilisaton of the land took place and the size of sports field and parcial area of the playground was allocated for car parking. The secondary school and the science block remainded untouched. Overall, the whole setup and architecture had taken a turn and modifications took place as per the decade.

The picture illustrates the modifications in the construction that took place over the past 25 years.

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change
 that happened was with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
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near by
 the secondary school and later with the farmland and the sports field.

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mainroad
 and the Playground had no Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).movement, and
movement and
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kept
 intact.

In 1950, the secondary school vicinity had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
, agricultural area and a ground for the kids to play.

Almost all the four components occupied the similar land proportions.

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But
 there was an upgrade in 1980 and its quite evident that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
 has taken a boom and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
 block and car parking Possible spelling mistake found.replacedrelatedrelaxedrelayedrefacedrel aced
relaced
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houses
 and the farmland.

Farmland had turned into sports field Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
were wiped
 off completely and car parking and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
 block were established
.

After 12 years further
Possible spelling mistake found.utilization
utilisaton
 of the land took place and the size of sports field and Possible spelling mistake found.partial
parcial
 area of the playground was allocated
 for car parking.

The secondary school and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
 block Possible spelling mistake found.remainedremainderremindedremanded
remainded
 untouched.

Overall
, the whole setup and architecture had taken a turn and modifications took place as per the decade. 