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Nowadays, technology developed dramatically as compared to past and it is effects the habit of people for shopping purpose However, others believe that it has confusing people in each choose. I will discuss my points of view along with my own opinion in forthcoming paragraphs. Commencing with, there are several advantages of shopping online web sites such as Amazon, Mytra and Flipkart and so on. To explain it, there are number of products and options for people to buy anything which they want to buy. Moreover, people can save more time while shopping on these apps as well as it is convenient way for shopping. For instance, Amazon provide great dead of discount to their customers on their products Due to it they can buy products with discount and cheaper way. Hence, people can compared price of any products with other apps then they stay without any confusion On the contrary, ther are several demerits of It which people claimed firstly, these kinds of shopping apps provides fake products and bad quality of products. Furthermore, people have to confuse in choosing exact products but there are heaps of options for them. As well as the value of purchasing clothes on local market gose down gradually. Then, they face many problems against this. Therefore offline and online shopping plays significant role for people choice. In my opinion people should not underestimate any kind of shopping. Mostly people choose anything according to their choice and which kind of source for their things they can choose by own. In conclusion, given aforementioned information is quite evident that although online shopping give variety of products and people can purchase anything by sit on bed and get home delivery.
Nowadays, technology developed
dramatically
as compared to past and it is effects the habit of
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people
for
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shopping
purpose
However
, others believe that it has confusing
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people
in each choose. I will discuss my points of view along with my
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own
opinion in forthcoming paragraphs.

Commencing with, there are several advantages of
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shopping
online
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web sites
such as Amazon,
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Mytra
and Flipkart and
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so
on. To
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explain
it, there are number of
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products
and options for
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people
to
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buy
anything which they want to
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buy
.
Moreover
,
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people
can save more time while
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shopping
on these apps
as well
as it is
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convenient
way for
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shopping
.
For instance
, Amazon provide great dead of discount to their customers on their
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products
Due to
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it
they can
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buy
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products
with discount and cheaper way.
Hence
,
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people
can compared price of any
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products
with other apps then they stay without any confusion

On the contrary
,
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ther are
several demerits of It which
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people
claimed
firstly
, these kinds of
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shopping
apps provides fake
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products
and
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bad
quality of
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products
.
Furthermore
,
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people
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have to
confuse in choosing exact
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products
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but
there are heaps of options for them.
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as the value of purchasing clothes on local market
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gose
down
gradually
. Then, they face
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problems against this.
Therefore
offline and online
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shopping
plays significant role for
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people
choice.

In my opinion
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people
should not underestimate any kind of
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shopping
.
Mostly
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people
choose anything according to their choice and which kind of source for their things they can choose by
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own
.

In conclusion
,
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given
aforementioned information is quite evident that although online
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give variety of
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products
and
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people
can
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purchase
anything by sit on bed and
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get
home delivery.
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IELTS essay shaken and bag shan ssbs sbsb

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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