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how to tackle a problem of industrial companies

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The problem that we intended to solve, was transforming a manual product line into automatically separating system. To go through more detail, a group of workers were designated in terms of separating two parts of a specific product which was produced by a company (The indicated company was inclined to supersede the time-consuming method with a procedure of no manual operation). Due to costly designing and maintenance of an automatic robot for their purpose, it was our task to come up with rudimentary and cheap panacea for separating the various partitions of their product. All various part of the device was designed and also analysed in SolidWorks software. We designed a conveyor on which products were set, while during the transmission, the top part of the product was separated readily and gently by a motionless barrier mounted overhead of the conveyor line, and consequently the upper part was conveyed and gathered in a predetermined box. Next, the remained underneath partition was conveyed to another box by dropping into a hole -directly under conveyor line- and evacuated the trapped petite debris inside it by rolling down to the box over a woven wire mesh.
The problem that we intended to solve, was transforming a manual
product
line into
automatically
separating system. To go through more detail, a group of workers
were
designated in terms of separating two
parts
of a specific
product
which
was produced
by a
company
(The indicated
company
was inclined
to supersede the time-consuming method with a procedure of no manual operation). Due to costly designing and maintenance of an automatic robot for their purpose, it was our task to
come
up with rudimentary and
cheap
panacea for separating the various partitions of their
product
. All various
part
of the device
was designed
and
also
analysed
in
SolidWorks
software. We designed a conveyor on which
products
were set
, while during the transmission, the top
part
of the
product
was separated
readily
and
gently
by a motionless barrier mounted overhead of the conveyor line, and
consequently
the upper
part
was conveyed
and gathered in a predetermined box.
Next
, the remained underneath partition
was conveyed
to another box by dropping into a hole -
directly
under conveyor line- and evacuated the trapped petite debris inside it by rolling down to the box over a woven wire mesh.
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IELTS essay how to tackle a problem of industrial companies

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