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Several languages are dying out . Some people think that this is not important as it would be easier to communicate in some limited languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Several languages are dying out. Some people think that this is not important as it would be easier to communicate in some limited languages. n1mpe
In this contemporary world, several individuals are claiming that with a limited number of some languages, it would be better to communicate rather than speaking the native languages as to be continued by every person from their culture. I totally disagree with the statement because with vanishing of most of the spoken languages, there would be totalky loss of culture and and loss of identical diversity of every country as tourism may collapse. This essay will discuss the same before reaching to reasoned conclusion.
In this contemporary world, several individuals are claiming that with a limited number of
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some
languages, it would be better to communicate
rather
than speaking the native languages as to
be continued
by every person from their culture. I
totally
disagree with the statement
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because
with vanishing of most of the spoken languages, there would be
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loss of culture
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and and
loss of identical diversity of every country as tourism may collapse. This essay will discuss the same
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before
reaching to reasoned conclusion.
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IELTS essay Several languages are dying out. Some people think that this is not important as it would be easier to communicate in some limited languages.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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