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Around'to do hard work as from childhood they

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As technology is being accessible to people day by day, this will surely happen when people will accomplish their works at home and children will take education with digital mode. Development of technology will give positive impact to society as employees can give quality time to their families and children can learn about moral values from their parents when they will stay at home. I partially agree with the given statement and I will discuss the points related to this in forthcoming paragraphs. There are certain regions linked with computer technology. Employees can give their quality time to their families and can build strong bonding with their near and dear ones when they will do work from home. If people complete their working task from their residential places, then there will less traffic concession on roads which led to decrease in the level of pollution. Moreover, if studies will be done by students by digital way, then parents have supervision on their off springs and can inculcate moral and ethical values in between them. Parents can also prevent their children from bad company as children will have fewer contacts of friends and will definitely excel in their education fields as well as can achieve success in their life. However, study and work from home will also have some drawbacks which business institutions and students willought to face in the future. To elaborate it, if employees will complete their working task from home, then they will have no healthy fear of their supervisors, and accomplish works in inaccurate manner which will decrease the productivity of businesses. On the other hand, children will suffer from various ailments if they consistently sit on the same place for taking online classes. Similarly, children will face difficulty to interact with their teacher, and will not able to understand all topics and aspects in proper manner. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that working and study from home has great benefits, however, drawbacks cannot be neglected as it associates with the development of computer technology.
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day by day, this will
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people
will accomplish their works at home and
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children
will take education with digital mode. Development of
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technology
will give
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positive
impact to society as employees can give quality time to their families and
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children
can learn about moral values from their parents when they will stay at home. I
partially
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agree
with the
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given
statement and I will discuss the points related to this in forthcoming paragraphs.

There are certain regions linked with computer
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technology
. Employees can give their quality time to their families and can build strong bonding with their near and dear ones when they will do
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work
from home. If
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people
complete their working task from their residential places, then there will less traffic concession on roads which led to decrease in the level of pollution.
Moreover
, if studies will
be done
by students by digital way, then parents have supervision on their off springs and can inculcate moral and ethical values in between them. Parents can
also
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their
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children
from
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bad
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company
as
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children
will have fewer contacts of friends and will definitely excel in their education fields
as well
as can achieve success in their life.

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, study and
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work
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have
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drawbacks which business institutions and students
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willought
to face in the future. To elaborate it, if employees will complete their working task from home, then they will have no healthy fear of their supervisors, and accomplish works in inaccurate manner which will decrease the productivity of businesses.
On the other hand
,
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children
will suffer from various ailments if they
consistently
sit on the same place for taking online classes.
Similarly
,
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children
will face difficulty to interact with their teacher, and will not able to understand all topics and aspects in proper manner.

In conclusion
, it can
be reiterated
that working and study from home has great benefits,
however
, drawbacks cannot
be neglected
as it associates with the development of computer
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technology
.
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IELTS essay Around'to do hard work as from childhood they

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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