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Several kinds of trees grow in these forests

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There are many forests in North America. There are many trees in these forests. Some of these trees are more than two hundred feet tall. Some are over five hundred years old. Several kinds of trees grow in these forests. Fir, cedar, and pine are three. These trees grow in different areas. Some grow in forests. Some grow on the mountains. People who lived in this place long ago used these trees to make things out of wood. Many of these trees are now in special areas. These areas are called forest reserves or national parks. Some parks charge a small entrance fee. Visitors must pay the fee to enter the parks. Then they can walk among the beautiful old trees. They must take care not to damage the trees. We should all take care of forests.
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in North America. There are
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in these
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are more than two hundred feet tall.
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Several kinds of
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in these
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. Fir, cedar, and pine are three. These
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in
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reserves or national parks.

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parks charge a
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entrance fee. Visitors
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pay the fee to enter the parks. Then they can walk among the
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beautiful
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take care not to damage the
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IELTS essay Several kinds of trees grow in these forests

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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